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Reviews for Return To Paradise

By : Aten
  • From ANON - Bria on November 03, 2007
    Damnit! I havent reviewed this story in forever.Im'really sorry.My computer broke down and we didnt have the money to get it fixed right away.Enough about home life, I see that you added the same chap twice and forgot the first.Well at least I got to find the missing chap on Mediaminer.I was kinda confused there.So Aria's pregnant again.Awesome^_^ Hopefully we can see a chibi Aria this time.Since we got two little boys the last time.They are cute.Especially Rhett since he'll look just like Aria except with blue eyes and tips.So I guess he's the chibi Aria.I mean I'd like to see a baby girl.I dont care who the father is.Though I have a pretty good idea.Anyway I wonder what Kai and Rhett will have powers over.I heard something about chaos,heavens,and dead.So does that mean Kai will control chaos, Rhett the heavens, and this new baby the dead?I'm just guessing the order.Fuck! I cant wait to see what other powers Kai will possess.Since he's the oldest and Rhett wont be showing his for a long time.Well I want to thank you for two chapters.Could that possibly happen with the updates after this.That would be great(:Well I gotta go.My grandma is bitching at me.Bye!
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  • From ANON - Kana on November 03, 2007
    This story is getting good.That tablet thingy or whatever it was said Aria would have sons.So Aria will have another boy? Aww I almost forgot Isis said it was damaged.So she could possibly have a girl.Also that thing said something about chaos,heavens,and the dead.I wonder which of the powers will the Umi spawns have?Oh and your still thinking of a name for Robbie's baby girl.I think Heaven Raine Zahra Ishtar is better than Miracle.I wonder what Isis is coming to domino for? Is it really almost time for Aten's big sleep? I can only imagine what will happen when Chibi Ishtar dies.
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on November 02, 2007
    Hey bakurasgirl. I know it's been so long since I reviewed, so I figured I would give you a review with a little surprise. First, the review. I am still so completely addicted to the series, and I can't wait to see what you have happen, and a part of me is hoping that Aria's baby is going to belong to Seto. Waiting to find out is killing me. XD

    Now for my little surprise. I am expecting a baby girl on January 15th, 2008. My first baby, and I am going to name her Aria. You got me so in love with the name and your OC that I am naming my baby girl after her, and I may even steal the middle name Kanika as well and name her Aria Kanika. I hope that's okay with you.
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  • From ANON - Kira on October 31, 2007
    Hello again.Sorry I havent reviewed.Been busy with school and life in general.Oh I think you skipped a chap.Becuase when I looked to see about a fight I heard about in chap 17 I didnt see it.And not only that but you posted the same chap twice.Just letting you know is all. So Aria knows that the kid could possibly be Seto's huh? I cant wait to see who's baby you'll make it be.Whosever baby it is please make the kid a girl!!!!Please!!!! A chibi Aria would be awesome(:
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  • From Shadi88 on October 07, 2007
    Still waiting to find out what happens in the story so rates five and review again.
    Butterfly Beauty
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  • From Shadi88 on October 02, 2007
    Hey, um I'm a little confused if "Return To Paradise" is the sequel to "Apocalypse" and that comes after "Journey To Heaven" and that is the sequel to "Return To Hades" and that is after "The Yami Virus" and that is the sequel to "Hostile Takeover" and that one is sequel to "Watch Over Me" then where does this story actually start? Because I can't find "Watch Over Me" and I really like where "Return To Paradise" is heading and I want to know how it originated. I do feel bad though that Aten is so sick and that Joey has liver failure. I also would like to know if that baby girl Mira that Robbie wants to adopt is same one that the girl in the doctor's waiting room had been expecting to give birth to; the one that upset Robbie by insuting him and Aten. I also think that Aria is pregnant with Seto's baby after that last vision took control of them. And I thought that Bakura and Marik would inlist the help of their men to resolve the situation with Roucher (sp?) and maybe make the reporters back down. Oh before I forget did Kai send the sleeper into shadow realm and have something to do with the creature that frightened Rhett. I also want to know if Yami Atem; Yugi's Dark found some way to have perhaps a mortal body or something like that. Just to understand with the blood. And I have to say the way Serenaty(SP?) turned out she really is a bitch. Well if she is a match I hope Joey understands what Seto agreed to and that if they should get divoriced for the operation then that they get remarried afterwards no matter what. I was also wondering what happened to the other YU-GI-OH characters like Honda, Otogi, Anzu, Mai, & etc? By the way I greatly enjoy this story and your lemons. espesially your lemons I sometimes wish it was me in these stories. Well I'm out of thoughts at the moment I'm so tired and hungry and there's work for me in the garage but I don't want to go there are snakes and they might not be friendly. Bye for now update soon kay you do good work, now where's that broom.
    Butterfly Beauty
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  • From Shadi88 on October 02, 2007
    What a twist Yami Atem a demented man with powers of the reaper bent on the distruction of all the other Yamis and their families. As well as trying to convince Yugi to take him back. What a great story, can't wait for the next chapters to be updated. I didn't realize this was the sequeal story so now I have to read the first part. Keep writing and best of luck.
    Butterfly Beauty
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  • From ANON - Bria on June 28, 2007
    Nice chap! I was expecting a AriaxSeto lemon not an AriaxUmi.Either way I'm happy. I havent seen a sex scene with Aria since 'Journey to Heaven'. Though I think Aria and Seto did do the nasty but dont remember.Who knows besides you? All I know is that I cant wait for the next chapter^_^
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  • From ANON - Bree on June 15, 2007
    Hi Bakurasgirl!

    I want to thank you for answering my questions by reviewing your story. I'm sorry I havent reviewed before but I've been busy. Its pretty weird your story has but one review. I mean your a great writer. But my friend Kailani and I have decided to review. Oh yeah Kailani's not sure if her email will show up here so she asked me to give it to you. Its seaofsorrows15@yahoo.com. She has a few questions that are similiar to mine. I wouldnt tell her because I was mad but she couldnt wait so I gave you her email if it doesnt show up on her review. Anyway it looks like Kai is showing shadow magic.Finally! I've been waiting forever to see when this would happen. What I dont get is why would he send Rhetts things to the shadow realm? That is all I have to say.Bye!
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  • From ANON - Kailani on June 15, 2007
    Sorry I havent reviewed but I thought you couldnt review unless you were a author.Its sad that you couldnt update today. I was looking forward to it. Hopefully you can update next week. Anyway I'm going to review all twelve chapters in this one review. For starters, I like how Aria keeps grossing out her father about Umi's pole*snickers* you come up with some pretty funny shit.Not only that the lemons are awesome.The one between Aria and Seto is the one I'm really waiting for. Also it seems Kai is showing signs of shadow magic. Thats great! I cant wait to see what other powers he and Rhett will display. Actually I have a few questions and if possible stuff to help you out if thats alright(I sent you an email a week or so ago but you havent replied).My email is right above. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
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  • From KikiItemri on January 31, 2007
    Oh my god, I can't believe it's been so long since I have reviewed and read any of your stories! Bakurasgirl, I have missed your stories so much!! I can't believe you are still writing them, and they are still as awesome and hawt as ever. You still have me addicted. Can't wait to read more! *gives you a chibi Thief King Bakura plushie* :) That's for getting me hooked again, lol.
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