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Reviews for Rite of Ascension

By : NihilEtNemo
  • From JubblesBubbles on January 08, 2012
    Great display of physical power in the Ancient Egypt! I loved how cruel and yet extremely sensual your Atem was!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2007
    Absolutely amazing! A wonderful story overall.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2007
    This was very nice, a different look on how Yami used his power as Pharaoh and why Kaiba is so obsessed with being in control. You fit these two together quite nicely while still seeming to keep them in character, and I liked how even though Yami was being a bastard (it's lonely at the top) you still made him a human being; which is something a good deal of fanfiction writers can't understand about villians. The bit with Kaiba shattering the puzzle and his reasoning for doing it was very clever. Good storyline, good characterization, good ending, just good.
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