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Reviews for Without Thy Love

By : CodyMThomas
  • From Kerstin on August 24, 2010
    I like this one even if I'm still unsatisfied because I want to know why they were seperated and ... you know ... the backround-story.
    However, your style of writing is really good, sesetive and sensual at the same.
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  • From Mystralwind on October 02, 2008
    Fluff is an integral part of every diet!! I need fluff. LOL
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  • From Diva937 on December 12, 2007
    Go read the plot bunny that only let me get three hours of sleep so my insomnia will have some meaning. I know it's not actually part of the story, but seeing as it's 4:30 in the morning for me now, it made me laugh... anyways! I loved this. I'm such a sucker for fluff, it's not even funny. I personally didn't think any of them were out of character at all. Just what they would be like if they weren't off saving the world every day. I especially loved the bartender. It's really rare for fanfiction to have good original characters. You did it really well though. And my favorite part of the whole thing was how he drank the shot every night just to remind himself of Bakura... AWWWW!

    P.S. ONLY three? My goodness, it's nice to know there are people out there still that are dedicated to editing! But I definately think you caught everything. Great job.
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  • From dragonlady222 on November 21, 2007
    This was a great story. Very mysterious but I'm glad they found each other again.
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  • From ANON - PotionsPet on November 18, 2007
    love this
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  • From ANON - Devil-Child on September 25, 2007
    That was so OMG.I almost cried you should write more stories like this.My heart is aching.
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  • From AliceMina on September 24, 2007
    Awesome story. I really like the Bartender POV. It was sweet and refreshing. Good job!
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  • From sglily on September 21, 2007
    What an interesting perspective this tale was told from! They were apart for six years? Wow... the whole mystery as to why Ryou and Bakura were separated in the first place lingers on... Whatever happened between them isn't even the point, the point was that Ryou wanted Bakura back and was certain that Bakura would come back to him and find him - somehow the club (well, a club) was important to them. I liked the fact that Ryou danced alone and wanted no one's company... except for the one he longed for. I loved the fact that Ryou stood up for himself when someone dared to force him to dance... a strong, feisty Ryou is to die for! And the two drinks he ordered... loved the idea and the ultimate significance of the alcoholic half of his usual. The reunion was probably as Ryou had always dreamed it to be... Nice story!
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  • From Sammei on September 21, 2007
    I really like what you did here, with having the bartender be the narrator. Great fic!
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