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Reviews for Every Truth A Lie

By : Marajohuiki
  • From barrie18 on August 12, 2008
    Don't think Mokuba was acting weak in this chapter at all. Considering that the people he trusted 'appear' to be the people involved in 'something' not right, he is doing amazingly well. Yami seems to be a slightly modified throw back of Season 0. Not quite a nutty psycho, but not the peaceful Pharoah either. If he is the reason Kaiba was kidnapped, hope we get to see some answers this time around.

    looking foward to the next update.
    bahen
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  • From dragonlady222 on August 07, 2008
    Good chapter. I hope that is not someone there to kidnap him. Mokuba should ask for help. Even Seto needs help on occasion.
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  • From barrie18 on August 07, 2008
    Don't quite understand what is happening here. Has Mokuba been moved by magical means to somewhere in the Kaiba mansion? And was it Yami questioning him and walking away disappointed? Love your style for the most part, but really would love a few blanks filled in as I continually feel I am missing the point/plot.

    Mokuba knows he needs help, but doesn't want it at the same time - typical. And yet he knows that Yugi and gang will back him up no matter what. A clever boy, but still needs to grow up. . .

    Here is hoping for some answers next time around. . .
    bahen
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  • From barrie18 on August 03, 2008
    So, as per normal, there is more to this than meets the eye, and the mysterious someone is after Mokuba as well. . . interesting.

    Like your use of Honda. It's nice to see him, not on the side lines for a change and perhaps in this story he plays a more major role.

    Really nothing else to say at this time, but will look forward to the next update.
    bahen

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  • From dragonlady222 on August 03, 2008
    Good chapter. I'm glad Mokuba didn't get hurt.
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  • From dragonlady222 on August 01, 2008
    Good chapter. A good fic with Yuugi and Kaiba would be great but I like it whichever way you go.
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  • From barrie18 on July 30, 2008
    Ah a new story to nudge you about. . .(hope this doesn't mean the other story is on the back burner. . .)

    Nice beginning and so far Mokie isn't wimpy, infact he seems to be taking charge very quickly. Will he be a total Kaiba or end up a team player will be interesting to see. (hope he doesn't end up in jail for killing Jou. . . I'm already to do the job myself. . . )

    Will look forward to see where this one is heading. . .
    bahen
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