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Reviews for Yu-Gi-Oh! Dragon Slayer

By : Smenkhkara
  • From Seto_Kaiba666 on August 04, 2019

    I hope there is more! I loved this 


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  • From ANON - Veronica on March 22, 2016
    I am so happy you have been updating this story. Your writing is so well done and the story, unforgettable. I have often thought about this story and wondered where I saved it too! I am delighted mokuba is OK, but I'm delighted to hear you mention the word sequel...
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  • From Juneblue on July 26, 2015
    This is the best goddamned fanfic I've read in so long. Forgive if this review is a cacophonic mess of raving chirps, I am so floored and eager after reading through your story!

    The amount of effort put into the story: from expositional bits to Joey's dialogue (his voice, his tone), carried over to me like intense wafts of something delicious and exquisite. How much did I appreciate you gave Joey such a vivid sound, you could tell it was him speaking, by the sound and by his humor. Characterization: unreal. You went beyond the confinement of canon, and went ahead to develop him so much more.

    From the first chapter, I had been so skeptical--at first--you have no idea how common of a trope it is for the two protagonists to meet under the circumstances of pet/master. And instead of veering us to a 'very dark, dubious consent scene'---I was thrown off guard when the moment bloomed to a completely different wind. And how the aftermath, how quickly Seto found out, how he even coped with the discovery! I honestly thought the story would drag out the dramatic irony (for well, dramatic reasons), you didn't. So I doubled over in wonder. The story's riveting because it tears your expectations and presents...something new.

    Since that scene, I knew I was in for a ride of anticipation and every chapter would surprise me. Every chapter felt purposeful without fillers. How their relationship develops, is so seamless which is paradoxical to the nature of their romance (rather turbulent), but I didn't feel once jolted out of the world you immersed me in. I wish it didn't stop where it stopped, I wanted to keep going!


    I'm also feeling the verge of something heartbreaking's about to happen. There's unresolved tension between Joey and his father, and his dying mother. The little moment in the beginning of the story (in Mokie's) with Roland inwardly thinking 'just used to fixing broken little boys', made my heart clench with Joey's own personal battles. Please break my heart, to a million pieces and slowly heal it back together, because every tumult Seto and Joey go through is an intense thrilling ride, and I just don't want it to end!


    You tend to over describe the scenery and setting, whereas a few sentences may suffice. I say this because I really want to remind that I'm greedy to know what happens in the scene rather than to what's on stage. Just mentioning the props are good enough. Really. It kills me inside to think that your energy and time might get sapped or caught in painting over the top details. Sometimes it's enough for a writer to know what it exactly looks like without describing word for word, because believe me we'll step into your space time fabric with our own vehicles of imagination. Just trust us a little more!

    I love this story. I absolutely love it. And I also felt a lot of pity that this only has....2k hits. This fandom's dying. It sucks. Reading this brilliant work had me a little motivated to perhaps contribute to the fandom as well. You just so very well captured the passion in this pairing, but you did so much more than that--believe me. I haven't read anything this good in any fandom for a long damned time. The level of maturity, you can tell the amount of research put into it. We see Kaiba actually working in this story, innovative, business ventures, ploys, etc,...whereas Mr. Grey some rando-billionaire in 50 Shades of Grey does jack shit in the whole book, you always get the vibe of a thirteen year old writing 50-Shades. This is so opposite. It's emanating realism in the haze of romantics. Joey is juggling jobs, and each job gave me a slice of real life as opposed to some kid's dilly dallying fantasies.

    Each job felt purposeful too. I always felt fate dabbing teasingly in this story. Brilliant ways of Seto and Joey colliding. So creative! Never exhausting or boring or predictable. From the new security job, then Mokuba devising that devious plan (I was really caught off guard again, thank you haha), Mokie's when Joey's the food critic, and even now, I didn't expect Joey's blood to tie him back to Seto again! That was just genius. So metaphoric. Joey is the lifeblood for Seto.

    I love, love you for this!

    Post this on AO3! If you transfer over to AO3 (they allow explicit content) I could actually follow for email alerts! And even though I'll try to check back often to aff, I much rather subscribe to the story. Except this site is really lame in that aspect, last time I checked there is no subscribe. My email's chemlea at gmail (dot com). Could you please let me know when this gets updated?


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  • From ANON - veronica on July 09, 2015
    I'm glad to see that you have continued this story. I hope. The next couple of chapters will be posted soon. You have really taken some liberties with mokuba's injuries.huh, did u ask your doctor what one could expect from such a fall? Anyway, I'm glad mokuba is going to be fine. Really good job.
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  • From HavocTellenoi on January 09, 2015
    As if Chapter 7 didn't cause a heart attack, this latest cliffhanger is evil, but oh so awesome. I'm rooting for Mokie to survive and for Joey to arrive before Seto has a complete nervous break down.
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  • From ANON - taffeara on December 22, 2014
    Love love LOVE this fic. The portrayal of both seto and joey are awesome and the story is wonderful. Not gonna lie I was going to flip shit when I read the last chapter. I'm super glad you ended it the way you did, but at the same time.... I think I'm going to have a heart attack unil you update. And I'm impressed with the dedication you have to keeping Joey's accent intact throughout all of the chapters. I'll be eagerly awating the next update and can't wait to see how you resolve this dilemma.

    V/r
    Taffeara
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  • From kuromori on March 17, 2013
    Re-reading this for the third time - I sincerely hope you'll continue it! I love the premise of the story and how Joey and Seto's relationship matures. Can't complain about the sexy bits, either! Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Mar on February 17, 2013
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE! This story is incredibly sexy and I love your characterizations!! MOOOOOAR!!!
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  • From ANON - cattib on November 24, 2012
    DAMN.. this is a great story..hope you update soon...it is awesome and entertaining...catti
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  • From smint45 on September 17, 2012
    Oh my god this story is so amazing!!!! I just love the way Joey comforts Kaiba!!! Poor Mokuba I already see the mental breakdown of seto coming!!! I hope Joey will be able to help him!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - SerenaJ on July 31, 2012
    OMG that so rocked! And the title is perfect. Too many dragons to slay, but i think Joey may have gotten the big one! So, sequel? Yes? Please???

    SJ
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  • From ANON - YACUMO on July 16, 2012
    Lovely. I adore this pairing. Speciall if we have a dominat possessive Seto and a submissive Jou into the mix.
    Did not like much the last chapter, but only because of the change in dominance, but meh, its your fic not mine Lol.
    Anyways, keep pdating. It has been really nice to read it.
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