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Reviews for Love Song

By : Yami_Red_Uchiha
  • From Athena on October 08, 2014
    Honestly not sure what to say about this one. I always make a habit of reviewing everything I read though Im not sure what to say. What I think happened was that you tried to use a song and its lyrics to make a story, which is not uncommon, but because of the nature of these lyrics things do seem out of place. I get cruelty and being consumed by his darkness but thats all within the realm of fantasy so my mind keeps asking 'why why why?'. Why did Atem reject Yugi in the first place? Why did his darkness overcome him? Why did the darkness come from? - so many questions. But then again this could just be the issue I often have with OneShots where they sometimes feel thin or incomplete. Its always that feeling of 'well what happened next'? So Im kind of trapped in a grey zone not really sure how to feel. Sorry if my review isnt overly helpful, but these were the thoughts it stirred in me as I read.
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  • From smint45 on July 07, 2012
    Really interesting story!!! I really liked it altough it seemed a bit rushed because it was so short!!!! In some parts it was a bit difficult to understand what is going on!!! But non the less I really liked it!!! Hope to hear from you again!!!
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