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Reviews for Contradictions

By : falsechaos
  • From ANON - DY on September 08, 2003
    Man, now I'm torn. Part of me thinks that's a great ending, and another wants more more more!!

    I really liked how you changed their names to reflect how they were feeling. It was a great subtle touch.

    Last thing: Sex = good uncertain sex = HOT
    You write great lemons. Do more! Do more! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Psyienna on June 29, 2003
    I like what you've done with this fic. Throughout all three chapters, I could feel the strength inherent in Honda and Jou's relationship. The dialogue felt natural and easy, especially in Chapter 1. Keep up the good work, and I know the rest of this fic will be as terrifs whs what you've written so far!
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  • From ANON - Heaven Fae - Of the Customized Landscape on June 28, 2003
    That was really good.... I liked how Jou finally realized WHY he likes Honda in the end...

    Warm embraces -- it's such a cheesy device; but at the same time, it's SOOO cavity-causing sweet.

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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on June 28, 2003
    DD: That was SO good!
    YD: You're not done, are you? You can't end it like that!!
    DD: Well, technically, the author can do whatever they want.
    YD: NO FAIR!!
    DD: *shrugs* We'll have to wait and see
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on June 28, 2003
    YD: Poor Tris!
    DD: Poor Joey!
    YD: This is where we left rea reading the lst time.
    DD: Yeah. Please put the next chapter out soon.
    YD: This story is great. Your writing style is fantastic!
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  • From ANON - Chibi Dark Magician on June 16, 2003
    Very interresting, I would like to see more please. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Reppa on June 15, 2003
    Mm, I can't wait to see more, you've definitely peaked my interest. Keep it up! *thumbs up*
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  • From ANON - Kitsune Hashiba on June 15, 2003
    Yay! =^_^= I've read this one back on FF.N... hrm. Dunno if I reviewed though... =^_^;; Anyways, there's SUPPOSED to be more since it's not finished yet, right? Cause I've been waiting for a while now.... *latches onto FC's leg* PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE GET THE NEXT CHAPPIE OUT SOON!!! T_T
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on June 15, 2003
    DD: Ooooo...you've posted this here! YIPPIE!
    YD: We've wanted to read the end of this one for AGES!!
    DD: Please update soon!!!
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  • From WatarisGirl on June 15, 2003
    Wow! That was great! More....Please?!
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