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Reviews for The Lost Eudoxia

By : ashknight
  • From ANON - Guest on September 12, 2003
    This story was great. Sad ending though. Please bring Yami back. Let Yami and Yugi be happy. Again cool story.
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  • From ANON - mikochef22 on July 19, 2003
    I reserve my right to review till i read the next one. Oh Im so mad right now.... Grrrrrrr, he better come back, I hate it when they end badly!!! Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>
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  • From ANON - Ash Knight on July 07, 2003
    i just posted the sequal. hope u enjoy
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on July 07, 2003
    RD:*gasping and trying to hold in her anger she looks to the white dragon with so much anger and hate that White dragon thought she might be in serious trouble before Red dragon said*bring....me....bakura no that sneaking coniving despicable bastard RIGHT....THIS.....MINUTE

    WD:*looks at her terrified at her rage* o-of c course rright a wway *imediatly snaps her finger and bakura shows up

    Bakura*looks around in surprise and irritation*what in ra's name am doing omfph*for he never got a chance to finish because at that exact moment RD had bashed him to a wall with her claws and he looks to see a furious fire red dragon infront of him and before he realizes it he is chained to the wall by indestructable chains*who the hell are u get me out of here or your going to pay u fucking gliding worm

    RD;*glares at bakura with cold hateful eyes* SILENCE for in this castle in my presense we only speak with respect and the only one who can make threats and do them is me u fucking piece of low life trash how dare u make yami get killed by wasting yugi's time and for going to that room with the tablets in the first place for what u did hell will break lose for u bakura for its judgment day and i here by sentence u to a full week of torment between me and my sister BRD for she wont be happy with u either
    B:oh like i care one god dam bit about your stupid sister what can she do to me*starts laughing before he is interupted
    BRD(or the BLack Red Dragon my sister);oh i think u will care when im done with u*smirks cruely at bakura to fit her tone wich was cold cruel and emotionless*for ive got tones of pain instord for u so stick around*snaps her finger and a tone of tourture items one can draw for in there heads no matter how sickening or sadistic or vile it is and begins to torture bakura for a few minutes and we here nothing but sinister laughing and blood curdling agony filled screams*ok RD your turn
    RD:why thank u sis*looks at her affectionatelyso lso lucky to have a sister like u oh and by tay aay authoress id suggest fixing this little prob cuz your a great author for getting yami and yugi together and for allowing them so much fun but i will not*is interupted by cough from BRD*er i mean we will not tollerate any foul treatment of yami as u can see behind us*looks to bakura who is looking at them with utmost terror in his eyes as well as pain and smirks sinisterly at him making him tremble in fear*well ta ta author and remember fixy fixy ok GTG now bye*turns back to bakura and starts torturing him and again we hear screams and laughing and as well as few coldy spewn"its what u deserve so take it like a man u little whimp" and more laughing*
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