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Reviews for Nightmares

By : ladymadrigal
  • From SangoHuntress1977 on December 14, 2004
    Great story. I love stories that talk about Yuugi's past. I wish the manga or anime would elaborate on his parents' whereabouts.
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on October 04, 2003
    That was pretty good i liked it except that the fact that ittlittle YUGI was hurt but other than that I luv it YAMI&YUGI were together and that's all that matters!!!!^___^
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  • From ANON - Icz on August 19, 2003
    Well I must say this was much better this time, you took the time to flesh out the story and it came out very well.

    One thing bugs me, I didn't like how Yami seemed to disreguard Yugi's nightmares. This was something that was really bothering him and I think he'd be a little worried, simply because Yugi seems to attract weirdness, and it could be something to do with the Shadow Magic.

    Anyway I hope you decide to touch upon some of the other issues mentioned in this fic, and I happy that your ear infection wasn't nearly as bad as poor Yugi's and that you did your homework on that.

    I hope to see more of your fics.


    Icz
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  • From ANON - Icz on August 02, 2003
    Awww, cuteness!

    I'll add that my inner JouxYugi fan was laughing like crazy at his comment in the recent SJ. I guess subtlety isn't Jou's strong point....



    Icz
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  • From ANON - Silent Sniper on August 01, 2003
    *wipes tears* I read this fic and was astonished. This is very realistic. Its beautiful. It dealt with Yugi's tormeted childhood....awww I want to hug that chibi! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 29, 2003
    Little Yugi is just too cute! I can just picture him, with his blanket and his tiny thumb in his mouth. ^_^ (Of course, I'd really like to kill his father... Grr.) Thank goodness for Grandpa and Yami...

    In other words, good story. ^_^
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  • From ANON - jewelcryer on July 29, 2003
    That was sad & the doc. was perverted ina way and a chibi yugi is sooooooooo sweet
    please finish i want to no what he tells he ji-chan
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  • From ANON - Yami Yavi-no-Lyithien on July 19, 2003
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I. Need. More. CHAPTERS!!!!!! *dies*
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  • From ANON - Maddy on July 18, 2003
    If I can work out something better, I'll redo it - but I knew if I kept screwing around with it, I'd never finish the story at all. Better to get it out and see exactly where I went wrong. (Right now both of my beta readers aren't around - darn vacations...:-)
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  • From ANON - Jadesaber on July 17, 2003
    That was kind-of a weak ending. I think you could have developed the story more, but for a first attempt at something like this it was pretty good.
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  • From on July 13, 2003
    aaaaaaawwwwwwww..... That's so sad, and cruel! *sniffle* Poor Yugi! Please update soon! I NEED to know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Jadesaber on July 13, 2003
    Poor Yuugi! I feel so sorry for him. I hope you post more soon! I want to see what happens when he tells Yami about what happened.
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on July 12, 2003
    YD: AAAWWW...*huggles Yugi*
    DD; Holy crap! That WAS bad.
    YD: Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Tegasus on July 11, 2003
    Ooooh! I like! More please!!!
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  • From ANON - Jadesaber on July 11, 2003
    Well, that was certainly an interesting first chapter. I hope you write more. This looks good so far. The only thing I noticed that you might want to fix in future chapters is when Yuugi was thinking about his mother. You wrote okaasan-san. Okaasan is already the proper name and already has -san in it. It's redundent to write -san again after it. Just thought you should know. Anyway, hope you post more soon!
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