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Reviews for Routine

By : Ykarzel
  • From ANON - alostblackcat on December 10, 2003
    ahhhhhhhh

    *sob*

    so so so sad!!!!!

    it's really good but really sad, and in the end i started crying literally.... it was so sad!!!!

    *shiver*

    sooooooo sad!!!!!

    please write more, i wanna know what happens to poor jou
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  • From ANON - JoeyFanatic on December 10, 2003
    WOWEE!!!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP GOING!!!
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  • From ANON - Ashley on November 23, 2003
    ...-Blinks.- Wow. This actually had me crying a little at the end. I'm such a big softie to heart. ; _____ ;

    Kitty: Oh shut up Ashley. You love angst, it's your fault you choose to read this stuff!

    Lemme' 'lone. -Glare.- I loved this, and don't update it. It's perfect as it is. ^____^ I like sadingsings when I'm depressed. It makes me feel a little better.
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  • From ANON - Slice on November 13, 2003
    It was beautiful and heartbreakingly sad and a wonderful oneshot. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Animom on November 11, 2003
    *finally exhales* Really excellent. You take the cliche and elevate it to poignancy by the quality of your writing.
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  • From ANON - Solitaire on November 10, 2003
    ......Okay, I'm going to refrain from swearing like a sailor because 1. it's not polite and 2. this is online where anyone can see it, but-! O! Okay, first, you know I'm not the biggest fan of Seto/Jou stories (but no longer the biggest anti-fan, thanks to evil evil you, evil evil Nkoah, and evil evil Yukou XP), and rape fics are totally depressing, but I feel so dirty because I liked a Seto/Joey!! ::cries:: My god, I hope you're happy, you sadistic little demoness. You've got me wanting to see Seto and Jou together. ARE YOU HAPPY?!?! ::cries some more:: I really did like it, though, even if it was uber-sad. ::sniffs:: You write this frighteningly well. And it was their anniversary, too. ::whimpers:: You're going to have to do some serious repair to my psyche after this, lol. Tell me you're going to write more...?
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  • From ANON - Oneida on November 10, 2003
    It's VERY good, are you going to continue? This is something I'd like to see the end of.
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  • From ANON - Taryn on August 23, 2003
    This is anime AndrAIa offa ff.n too lazy to go to ff.n ^^;;
    OMG It's amazing! I kept crying! *wipes away tears*
    I cant remember what else I was gonna say, because I'm too tired...
    But I hope you write more! Pweeze!
    ~Taryn~
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  • From ANON - AngelicMouseGirl on August 16, 2003
    WOW. JUST WOW. Is there going to be more? Yikes...I will read it if there is. This is really good. Kinda messed up...but really good. You are an awesome writer! So I'll be looking! Arigato! Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Kharstii on August 14, 2003
    I sooooo wasn’t expecting like this when I clicked on it. It totally blew me away. I’m still having trouble thinking. I mean I was squirming and twitching all the way through this. Just a stark, sterile portrayal, a kind of nasty gritty that is true to life. Very good partly because it was while written and because it’s a on a some what of taboo subject.
    Oh, please continue this. It's tooo good to leave as it is. It's just screaming 'MORE!!!!!'. Maybe it should be told in Seto's POV or Mokuba's and tell how things happened afterward.

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  • From ANON - Yamijou on August 13, 2003
    *sniffles* POOR JOUNOUCHI!!!!! *huggles him*
    Yamikaito: THAT &^%& *runs off to beat Jous father to a pulp* GRRRRRRR Kai Kaiba-kun too...
    Teacher didn b'leve 'm *sniffles again* i be'ter go b'fre My nose gets so stuffed I can' talk straid...
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  • From ANON - Leaf Zelindor on August 12, 2003
    -falls over and blinks several times-
    Wing: i think she's in shock......-pokes Leaf with a stick-
    AH! stop! anyway, i really liked your fic...but is that really all it's going to be? i hate the idea of Jou totally leaving Seto like that! -sniffles- but if it is it, very good fic, i love it, you write very very well!
    ~Leaf~
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  • From falsechaos on August 12, 2003
    This is the kind of story that hurts to read and leaves a filthy, nasty aftertaste in my mind. This is something that has forced its way past my short attention span and bura coa comfortable little nest for the next few hours. Damn good writing. No fancy tricks or manipulations of language or theme. Just a stark, sterile portrayal that somehow still manages to sting like hell. You've taken a tried and tired cliche in ygo yaoi fandom and made into something gritty and real and hurting. The pattern has been etched into Jou's mind and made part of his routine.

    I'm not quite sure how you could follow up this chapter, but it begs (or rather, we the rea beg beg) for it to come to a complete circle. As it is now, "Routine" more than stands on its own. Could it be possible for Jou to be healed, though? For some sort of hope to shine through this? If you could write that and make it work... Hn. You've already got the makings of professional talent. A second working chapter to this story would only drive home the point.

    As always, good work and I'm to see more!
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  • From ANON - EmeraldRains on August 12, 2003
    okay that was sad I seriously have tears in my eyes. You're stories really have that kind of impact you know
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  • From ANON - KittyKat on August 12, 2003
    Daisy: Heh heh, it's okay. ^_^;; I know how it feels to have written something and not know how on earth you came up with it in the first place.
    Nuva: This was very good! ^_^ We haven't read an S/J storth tth this kind of drama in it. Very well written!
    Daisy: I almost cried at the end. I feel so sorry for Jou. All this stuff that is going on is really messing him and his relationship with Seto up. Poor thing.
    Nuva: You really should update this... that is, if you can finish it. Usually, it's kind of hard to update a story where you have no idea how you got to writting it, as you said.
    Daisy: But if you're gonna update it, please do! I gotta find out what happens next! Or, as some reviewers have said, you can do Seto's POV. This is still very good either way.
    Nuva: ^_~ Keep up the good work.
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