rate_review Reviews

I liked how you had the fic. I don't normally read incest, but you've given me a reason to think on it. Though, I do have to question my sanity. Nevertheless, good job. Yami and Yugi came out fantastically. So, again I say, good job.

Ani: BWAHAHAHAHAHA!I _LAUGH_ AT ANZU'S MISFORTUNE!!!BWAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAA!

Moonheart: *stares at Ani strangely*Hey Fang!Your koibito had finally gone off the deep end!

Whisper: Well this fanfic was ab-

Fang: *cuts in*Don't you talk crap about MY koibito!You shouln't even have the RIGHT to talk like that!At least MY koibito doesn't
go for bondage and chain me to the F-ing bed!

Whisper: *annoyed and irritated voice*As I was saying-

Moonheart: Ohhhhhhhh no,you did _NOT_ just insult my girlfriend!

Fang: So what if I did?You called my koi insane?Why can't I call yours chain-fetish?

Whisper: Grrrrrrrrr.......

Reine: *walks in and smiles seductively at Moonheart,chains in hand*So what If im chain-fetish?So is Moon-koi.He LIKES to be chained
down,doncha Moony Boy?

Moonheart: Yes I do and im bloody proud of it.However,I DO like getting a break sometimes.

Ani: *isnt aware of any of this*AHAHAHAHAHA!THE IRONY OF IT ALL!THE RETARDED !@#$% DIDN'T KNOW WHAT HIT HER!SHE DIDN'T SEE
IT COMING!AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHHHHHAAAA!

Whisper: *glares at them*

Fang: You know Moon-kun?

Moonheart: Yeah?*knowing smirk*

Fang: I think you're right.She IS nutz.You may be a bondage-fetish guy,but you sure are perceptive.

Reine: *smirks*Or your just dumb :P

Fang: WHAT!?I'LL SHOW YOU!

Moonheart: BACK OFF!SHE'S MINE!

Whisper: SHUT UP!

All(even Ani stopped ranting): O.O

Whisper: SHUT UP!SHUT UP!SHUT _UP_!I CAN'T BLOODY TAKE IT ANYMORE!

All: ..................

Whisper: FINALLY!*huffs*Well then.Like I was _TRYING_ to say.*shoots a glare at her team mates who shrink back in slight fear*This
fanfiction has good ratings from all of us...as you can see...especially Ani.Uhhhh...she's a SERIOUS YxY fan who SOMETIMES enjoys YxYxS.
I wasn't TOO happy with the incest because I think it's wrong,but my own love for YxY relationships overpowers that and makes it right.Good
job and keep up the good work!Bye!*pause*Now for YOU four.....*maniacal grin*

Moonheart: Ah.Crap.

You know me, Oni, I'm just going under my alias. Think of the first word and translate it into English. That's the first part of my name. ;)

I like the song. :D The only part that bothered me was how you kept calling them brothers. That kind of tore it away from the yami/hikari pairing to an incest one.

But I'd love to see what Anzu would have said. XD

TTYL, Oni-chan!

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was so hot!!! I loved it!!!!! GODS!! that song is so weird and annoying but wonderful at the same time! everyone is humming it now a days....gosh! But that was so cool!!! now, was yami actually a college student, or was that whole blah blah a coverup for him being yugi's yami...cause, ya know,, he still called yugi his aibou.....i don't know! ALL I KNOW IS THAT WAS FUCKING HOT!!!!!