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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I cant believe you remember me ;).
This is Allison Rasche now called Allison Beard I'm married :O.
This is Allison Rasche now called Allison Beard I'm married :O.
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September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice straight lemons, but the language could use some work. And it's a bit breezy on structure and could use some spots filled in.
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September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH SH!T! That was SOO hot!!! Great work. Please write more!!!
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September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* I think i already made a review but doesn't matter anyway. PLEASE CONTINUE AND TELL US WHAT HAPPENED WITH MOKUBA!!! "AIBOU?" *LOOKS AT YAMI SWEETLY* Yes? "What r u doing?" um... *didn't answer cause felt something wet on my neck* Yami? *shiver* "hmm?" Can we do it later tonight? its only 6:48 in the morning! *Yami sighed* "very well" great! "Aibou?" hmm? "your review" oh! PLEASE CONTINUE AND DO IT QUICKLY!!!
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September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... That was really something...
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September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG... I... Uh... Hmm... Very uh, interesting... I loved it, I feared it, I uh... Enjoyed?? Well, anyway, I am so thrilled I read this one... And God what the hell are they going to do about Mokuba?? Lord, they are in some damn trouble... This was cool, I loved this chpt so much.
Later...
Later...
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September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No, no, no! Pe doe don't include Mobuka! Maybe i'm reading too much into, but i like the pairing as it is, it will be funny to see Jou and Seto's reaction to being busted! please continue
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September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well....Mokuba has been properly traumatized XD actually it was kinda funny there at the end.....-grins- ~Leaf~
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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!! I want part two ^___^
This is writing very well
This is writing very well
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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah! that needs a sequel! please continue!