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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great fic
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September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a cool fic
you should write a sequel
you should write a sequel
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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG THAT ROCKED! Why does it have to be a one shot ne? I love the whole ice/fire thing...in fact I have a few fics similar to this but they keep their powers in mine *sweatdrops* But it rocked!
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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
not bad, but can you build on it ? make it an story arc!
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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! quite quite nice, and much more imaginative and better-written than most. And the ending made me laugh, it was a good closing.
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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was a very good story, thank you very much :D I love the plot, and the idea is really nice and full of magic. Cool :D or hot :P (considering the lemon). And I love the about time bit :P
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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i thought that was pretty good actually, wasn't totaly PWP. i liked the whole elements thing. ^_^ you could almost continue it too..but it's very good as is! ~Leaf~