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for Wish Come True

by JesseVargas

person DarkLotos
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAAAAAAAAAT!!!!! o_O
What kind of end is that SUPPOSE to be !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????????
Couldn't you think of something more ROMANTIC FOR PEASE SICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved the story but you RUIN IT WITH THIS END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GET BACK HERE AND CORRECT THIS MISTAKE NOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Oni No Yami
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummm... I liked it until the dream seqence. I couldn't finish it because it was too much like The Wish or whatever that short-story was called. Save that it was a swan and not a puppy and they were emeralds instead of leaves. So, sorry. ^ ^; It was a good idea, though.
person Coley Bear
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic was super cute! I loved the 'engulfing the thingy' idea. I was laughing so hard. Looking forward to the sequel! ^_^
person hazel aka inuyashagirl
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha oh my godddddddddd hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha stop ahhh so funny hahahahahahahahahahahahaha I mean the thingy part I feel sorrr hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah oh sory no realy I think I have a crush on him (Im a
girl by the way ) hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahabahahahahahaqhahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahhahahaahahhaahahhahahahhahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhaahhaahahhahahaahhaahahhaahhaahhahaahhahahahaahahhahahahahahahahhahahahaghahahah oh my godd that was funny.
person leaf zelindor
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
weird.........-lol- okay second helpings! muwahahahaha i'll watch for the sequel ~Leaf~
person mila
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice story
i love it
person DarkQueen
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, that was indeed DRAK!!! Don't get me wrong I like it *grins* It's different!
Hope yove tve the sequel out soon, and don't worry Yuri is fine by me!
LATER...
person Yaky
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG, please don't let her rape Yugi, please *drops to knees* You're making a pregnant lady very sad !_!!!!!!! But don't worry I still like it, but man is your brother sure has some dark thoughts. Reminds me of my sister, hehehe! Well, ladies bring the sequel out soon!!!

Q: Are you gonna continue Terrible Destruction? Sorry it's just, that I really like it...
BYE
person Naye025
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sequel? Bring it on! Once again, I loved this story! How can you not just love Seto and Jou?

Ja!
person Bambi
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU ENDED IT THERE?! Hurry with the sequel, hurry! Lol, at first, I thought you made Joey a girl...ya knowame ame name. *blonde moment* But yeah, great job and update soon!
~Bambi

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