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for Wish Come True

by JesseVargas

person Jenniyah
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH my god!!! Jou says NO tiba\iba's proposal?..noooo, why would he do that... sob... oh, i was sooo hopping they would get together...sob...
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No?!?!? How could Joey say no??? I'm almost crying cuz of it! *sniff* He has to say yes!
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Huh....why doesn't Joey want to marry Seto? They're so cute together but I love it, i love ts ats and stuff in fics. Your fics rule! Keep it up I can't wait for more
please update soon, hmmm what else can I say in here? Oh yes you rule! there ^__^

ACIDFLOWER
person Yaky
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww, not to worry you two! You take time, but it's worth it. I love this fic and I'm a little sad it's gonna be over soon *sniff* Yep, but happy too ^_^!!!!!!!! ~Anyway~ PLZ, continue soon can't wait for the next chapter to be up, BYE...
person DarkQueen
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, there glad to see ya! Don't worry how can somebody be mad at you guys, not me ^.^!!!!!! Well, Awsome update and I do hope you continue soon, I have to go work now, but I'll catch you LATER...
person KC
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: finally, u've updated!!!
Yami: *growls* i'm still mad at u for hugging Acid...
Me: but Yami, i didn't kiss
Yami: you never know... *leaves room quietly*
Me: *sighed* Anywayz, Continue! When's the wedding by the way? Don't tell me u've forgot!!! Luv the chappie!!! Continue and i'll be hearing from yea!!! See u! *runs after Yami*
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah a update this story is so good touching even ^_^
and thanks hon for the reviews I just love your fics so much keep up the great work! *hugs*

ACIDFLOWER
person DJ-Baby
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sure, I'll review more. (Mommy)
You know I love your stories.
This 12 chap. Was wow amazing.
I'll try telling Nina about it. I'll get her to review too.
We'll talk later . Ok
person Araki
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ha, nothing happened to my little Jou! Now Seto, propose Propose

Yami:Go back to bed..
Yugi: Her screaming woke me up...
Araki: UPDATE SOON,,,,PLEASE!
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Np I'll always review your fics ^__^

AF: So tired I been studying grammar all day but I learned a lot just fixed some in my x-mas fic *yawns*
Yami: Jenn you cannot fall asleep yet, remember you have to make sure your drunken brother is ok, he’s passed out on his bed.
AF: *Yawn* you watch him Yami I'll going to bed, by the way you're welcome to come *wink* just review first *walks into her room*
Yami Huh...*cough* This is uh... I don't like Seto do I?
Seto: Shut up Yami I well be the best Duelist in the world WHAHAH!!
Yami: That's it you're on *Folds out duel disk*
Seto: *Grin* Whatever my Blue eyes well burn you into ash
Joey: *walks over* Seto I hate to bug but but I need a bath, I'm itchy and you said you wash your pup
Seto: Shut up, I'm going to duel Yami here
Seto: I will be the best duelist again Whahah

Af: *walks out of her room* Ok this is what happens when I let Yami review *points to Yami*
Yami: What Seto came here first
Joey: Seto..come on....

AF: Sorry for this mess can't trust these boys keep the great writing up hon

Seto: WORLDS BEST!!!!!!!




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