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WOW, that was SO HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, Plz I need more, more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more, Well you get the picture so PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!
LATER......

AWWW that was CUTE in a wierd sorta way!!! ~Anyways~ I don't know Yamis' name I thought it was Yami that's what everybody calls him, but I like how things are going although I was kind of dissapointed that "Yami" Raped Jou that wasn't nice *pouts* don't get me wrong I still LUV this story now that Seth is being all nice and stuff that's kinda CUTE.. Well I gotta go Hope you Update SOON LATER...

P.S
Almost forgot My friend has posted her first story and I would be most greatful if you would R&R for her she's really nervous nobdoy is goig to like her story So would you PLZ it would be a GREAT honor for me and her.. The story is Called Desperations By eyesrdiolies So would you PLZ it would mean a lot: If you DO LOTS OF THANX ^-^ LATER..

I don't if I reviews this befoe or not, but YaY!! Ummm ..... That's all me brain can think of this early in the morning .... other than More Damn it! Write more!

WOW very intresting story and setting!!! AWSOME job so far You must continue this is developing along GREAT!!!
I wonder what the 'pharoh' could probably want to talk 'bout just when things were getting GOOD^_-! DAMN Yami you had to get in the way...
Well anyways like I said AWSOME job so PLZ Update SOON later...

Sweet Ra, that Pharoh has terrible timing *glares*.... Anyways, nice work. Keep it up

Please coue sue soon!

Hehe...I like it! please update it soon!

Hehehe...

Jonoi: *sings* I don't want, anybody else, when I think about you I touch myself!

BWAHAHAHAHHAHAAA!!! Oh Seth, you know you want him. XD

OHHHHHH LOVE THIS PAIR SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! REALLY GOOD WRITE MORE!!!!!!!

A good start to a good story