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for The Dark Deal

by hatochiisai

person Yoake Ryuu-chan
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... it’s an interesting idea alright. It seems like the actual ‘plot’ bits were a little lacking, could’ve used a bit more detail and personality maybe... but homg, such a talent you have for lemons ^_^ Man, my interests are obviously getting stranger by the day, but PegasusxRyou is HOT XD
person Saka
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa DARK!! And I loved it. Awesome job with the timeline 'n all! There are so few Pegasus fics that I actually like but this is one of them! FOR SURE! AWESOME WORK!!

Your fan always!!

~IceAngel~
person OsaP
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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that said, this was terrible. not like 'i hate this story so much' terrible, but like 'where did you come up with this idea' terrible. a good terrible....yeah... that sounds about right. i just feel so bad for ryou. >_< i do like how this fit into the series rather well and explains why ryou never gets rid of that pesky spirit. so, despite the first few sentences i really did like this but the fact that i did is terrible. oh, just keep writing u crazy good author u!
person UrufuChikara
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Emmmmm.................................... ............................................... ........................................
person Soran
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
certainly dark. the double play bakura did on his hikari was very satifyingly angstfull. keep writing, Ill try to review again.
person Mia
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be another chapter to this story or is it just a one chapter thing? And, if it is going to be more then one chapters...is Bakura going to "change" or..........what? What's going to happen? I wanna know...
Anyways, update soon. Ja!
person Tanaskarel
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was GREAT I tell you you really make a greate story puting toghether the inocen and dark personalities of Ryo and Bakura.
person AxRxUxKxAxS
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
youre so evil!!! i love it >XoD muwahahaha! the blood, the rape, the bondage, all so satisfying *big ass hentai grin* did i ever tell you i love your work?
person Moose
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
0_0....-_-...0_0 That was...quite disturbing. I'm not really a fan of Pegasus/anyone pairings, especially Ryou. But, I'll forgive you since you've done so many wonderful Bakura/Ryou stories. Just...please don't make this pairing a habbit. It was a well written story, though!
person happy yaoi lover
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*o* another pice of yout fine work....vary fine ^_^ i await the day when i have anough brains and skill to write like you do....untill then,your faithfull fan, happy yaoi lover

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