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Pleasete ste some more this is such a good story and it's sooo creative can't wait till next chapter please update soon.

You now, I've read this chapter like a million times now and you haven't update yet??? c'mupdaupdate soon, we all want to know what's gonna happen to Yugi after his atempt of murdering Yami, also, Yami has to get revenge from the romans since they tried to broke their aliance, well...they actually did break the aliance because they tried to kill the pharaoh. Anyway, Yami has to save Yugi from the punishment and they have to return home. Please, update soon. Great description of Yami as pharaoh, just of imagine him dressed as pharaoh I begin to drool without stoping. He's so hot, and he's so cool. HE'S THE BEST!!!! just update soon ok? or we'll send you to the shadow realm!! Wahahhahaha x_x

i love this story! one of the best stories i've ever read. Keep working on it and give us the end, 'cause i barely can wait. write son yami and yugi romance after yugi's murdering attempt against yami. i can't believe you almost kill yami... you should be punished for that... but it makes the story a lot more interesting so you get our pardon.

this is a great story
write more please

Hey, there ^_^!!!!!!! Glad you updated, nah it wasn't that long, other people take longer so don't worry Ok! ~anyways~ GREAT update Poor Yugi, Yami too! I have to admit that I tho Yug Yugi was going to be raped for a second there, when the guards came and kinda of undress him *sweatdrops* Hopefully he won't.....
What can I say I'm a big fan Of The Dragon&Puppy they are Just so CUTE, I kinda like the dominant Seto 'master/puppy thing' really works for me *winks* Well, I gotta go to work now, but I'll C U soon( I HOPE) LATER.......

AWSOME Story so far! Well I luv the setting and touplouples*They're just TOO CUTE*Luv Yugi&Yamis' Lemon scene(who wouldn't it was SO HOT)!!!! Just a little worried 'bout Yugi but I know he'll get better.~Anywayz~ Great job PLZ continue As SOON AS POSSIBLE your story is GREAT can't wait for the next chapter So PLZ HURRY, gotta go LATER ^_^...

OMG, GREAT Story Love Yami&Yugi that was beyond HOT didn't know Yugi like it rough ^_- ~anywho~ AWSOME plot and you have my Favorite couples( I wouldn't mind a little Lemon from Jou&Seto and then let Yami catch them that would be So FUNNY!) *It was just a thought nothing serious* Well PLEASE continue I LUV your story already and I know It'll get better by the SEC. PEASE HURRY and UPDATE SOON

LATER...