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for Slumming with the mutt

by akuchan

schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lol I can't wait for CH 3. Hurry and write it please.
person Yaky
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GREAT I'm glad they enjoyed the movie, POOR Jou he had to give himself a hand job awww I need more action so PLEASE CONTINUE AS SOON AS POSIBLE LATER!!!
person DarkQueen
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW I thought for a second SETO was going to give JOEY a Blowjob?! OH well can't wait for chapter 3 please HURRY and update SOON. I LUV THE STORY so far so don't keep me waiting i HATE waiting HURRY I MEAN IT!!!!
person Rach
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH this is too great! PLEASE update soon!!! n'tn't wait for chap. 2!
person KC
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: *cheers* U DID IT FOR THEM!!! *hugs author tightly*
author: can't breath...must let go
Yami: *grabs author away from me* stop that!!!
Me: *smirk* but that chappie was awesome!!! *tears in her eyes*
author: well, i did made some few details in it
Yami: like watching a porno movie *laughs and leaves*
author: hey, i don't watch a perno movie!!! *followz my Yami*
Me: *shakes head* those 2 will never learn PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE THE STORY!!! *follows Yami and author*
person sharem
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I rather like this story...it's pretty good...^_^
person Animom
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yeah, I think your decision about the "extra entertainment" during the movie (don't want to spoil it) was the right one. Let 'em simmer for a while, it's always moun wun when they finally ...

person AngelicMouseGirl
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Hey great chappy. I'm glad they actually didn't do stuff in the theater. It sounded horrible in there. Sooo I am really hoping for some lemony goodness chappy soon! PLEASE! I don't care that they didn't do it there, but I hope they go somewhere else soon to do FUN things....^_~ *licks lips* MORE CHAPPY PLEASE! Arigato! ^_^ Ja ne!
person YamiJou
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I love it! this fic rules.. *puppydog eyes* come out with ch 2 SOOOOON! neeed it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the little "bite me" thing with their lil ecchi thoughts hehe... and I want to see what happens when they go out...MOOOOOORE!
person koneko-koinu
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I really like how you've planned it out, and are actually bringing a little bit of reality into the story with the whole theatre and movie thing. It sounds very interesting and I look forward to reading more of this story. Ja.

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