rate_review Reviews

OMG! THat corrupted me byond belief Shardy! 100 f---ing stars for you!!! Update soon. God, I must be getting addicted to this smutt.

wow...this story so cool. i like serenity taking control! never saw that. i'm a newbie here but i like this story so far.

I'm not even reading this just copying it for my brother but the third chapter needs fixing and I can't believe the ooc ness of this fic

Put up part 4!! ;_;

This is hilarious and sexual!! XDDD I love it!! Best ever!!

Wow. I want more!

Well, that was interesting. Lol, quite interesting indeed... *smirks*

*grins* ^^ Guess who?

Now for the review:

Nice fic, except the concept of sticking a strawberry in your body and making someone eat it kinda scared me....^^a;;

XD You have not tainted me fully yet!! MWAHAHAHA!!!!

omg Shardy... this is... really... really sad lol... only you woul come up with this, like seriously ONLY YOU! You just left though, so i'll go to bed (since i fell asleep in science class and Mrs. Choung was trying to decide wut to draw on my face in permanent marker) and read this another day lol... even i'm not quite that perverted... i dunno where you get it... i can see it, you'll get married and u'l come back on this site and want to try out alll of the tactics you used on Kaiba lol... u're gonna have a very interesting sex life shardy *snickers*

Well, I am a pervert too, but you are even a bigger one than I am. Who has a fucked up enough mind to shove strawberries up her pussy? Pussy flavoured strawberries? You are sick, dude! This is a great story...really erotic and arousing.