rate_review Reviews

Me: HOLY SHIT!!! THAT WAS GOOD!!!
Yami: *smirk* Serenity is going 2 be so grounded against her brother
Me: shut up Yami
Yami: but she is, she stole the card from Yugi's deck
Me: so what? I usually steal cards from your deck though
Yami: U DO WHAT?!
Me: uh oh *leaves room quickly*
YAMI: DAMN, I HATE REVIEWING FOR STORIES!!! NO OFFENSE THOUGH, BUT PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND LET'S SEE SETO GIVING SERENITY SAME PAIN!!! U KNOW WHAT I MEAN. PLEASE CONTINUE!!! *leaves room to follow me*

Wow...really loved it. PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!

O_____o Woah, didn't know Shizuka can be like THAT! *lol* Write more! >D

Wow... more, more... MORE! >D I love the SetoxShizuka(Serenity) Shipper! ^__^ Well, sorry I am not a member of Fanfiction or Adult-Fanfiction.net, but I hope you'll count my review! ^^#

Okay, I want more, damn it!

ha. I saw it - and got scared. Read it and thought; thank god that - oh i'm ignorant, I just call her serenity @_@ actually isn't portrayed as being as wet as the anime shows her as!
If i had a tail i'd wag it ^_^ please can you throw us some more seto in leather and handcuffs....

Whahaha! Excellent! It's about time somebody humbled Kaiba. >:D Go Shizuka! Yeah! Heh heh, CONTINUE! ^_~ (Gawd, I'm such a pervert. :P )

This story has major potental going for it. The man reason its well written and another reason is that it's refreshing to see a het story among all the yaoi. And the couple is astesicaly pleasing as well. I'm looking forward to seeing Kaiba become a "Wheeler's" bitch. Now, inquiring minds are wanting to know if Shizuka is a virgin still or not.

Me: actually u spelled the egyptian god card name wrong
Yami: yea baka!!! its actually Slither not Slpyher or what ever u put it!!! *hits author*
Me: YAMI!!! U BAKA, IF U DO THAT, THE AUTHOR WON'T UPDATE!!!
Yami: ah, oops? *leaves room quickly*
Me: *rolls eyes* CONTINUE 2 UPDATE QUICKLY!!! *runs after Yami*