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for Burning Sea

by hatochiisai

person ferocity
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well that was funny!!! I wish i could chill out like that. I wouldn't mind if both Yami and Bakura were there. Know what i mean? *elbows you*
person ferocity
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww!what a cute ending. But goddamn was that sex scene hotter than fire!! gosh keep going.
love always
fero.
person Lilie the mouse
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice lemon. Makes a day at work all the better :)
*puppy dog eyes* could we have some Marik/Malik and Yami/Yugi action too, phuleez? Even Malik had his glorious chapter... Yugi didn't have anything at all... :'(
person DH
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, a new chapter, bout time they got something going!
person Wicabeth
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit O.O;;... I think I need to change into a dry pair of panties after that lemon.... *pants..*
person IYYashi
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Oh god! I loved this! The romance is really touching me! ^.^
Yumi: Romance?! The first lemon and it was hot!
Yuji: I liked it! Bakura finally confessed! But I was pretty mad at him when he said all those mean things to Ryou.
Yumi: Oh but he made it up for it! Oh and those perverts! *Laughs* God I thought I wouldn't be able to stop laughing when Yami: Yugi, Malik, and Marik were watching those two have sex like it was some sort of free show! ^.^
Yuji: Ohh! Marik and Yami are bad influences on Malik and Yugi!
Yumi: I don't mind. Sometimes it's good to be a bad influence.
Yuji: Oh well *shurgs* At I really like this! And the garden pool thingy sounds so cool! It must be very romantic!
Yumi: And the perfect place for another lemon. Maybe Marik/Malik next? Or Mikado/Ahmose (I like them, they're cool)
Yuji: Perv.
Yumi: Only when it's getting good.
Yuji: Well please update soon! Please! I'm really liking this!
Yumi: Ditto!
person IYYashi
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Oh forgot to say something! Don't change the couples! They're my favorites the only that aren't is Duke/Seto and Joey/Tris but I can deal with that! Just don't change the Yugi/Yami Ryou/Bakura and Malik/Marik THOSE are really my absolute favorites!
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ryou kicked Kura's butt!! YES! Go Ryou! Can't wait for the next update and to see what happens!!
person Malik the Psycho
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dont like Ryou in this XD But anyways, good fic, good lemon..*Whispers* I want MarikxMalik action next*Grin*
person Anon
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! I can't WAIT to read the next chapter! I kind of remember this chapter. And I THINK you had chapter 17 up before...but I don't remember. Oh well! ^-^

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