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for Burning Sea

by hatochiisai

person Saka
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no poor Ryou. What's gonna happen? Please update soon I just hafta know if everyone makes it on time or if they're gonna be too late. Please please please please please please please please please please.....update soon again! Keep up the awesome work!!

~IceAngel~
person azhur
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAAIIII!!! you is mean!!! ... update soon i'm dying of knowing what will happen next!!
person MinuetLove
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ryou...torture is never a good thing. This was a great chapter though, hope help arrives in time to save them all!
person December Jewel
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! NO! RYOU! Oi! I don't want to be near when Bakura ever comes there... Continue soon!
person Drago
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Write more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Tessa
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* OMR! I hope Bakura is right about the five day thing. Hes such a grand pirate too ^^
I loved how Seto waiting until the others left and left Kura have a big cry ;_; POOR LITTLE RYOU.. and teh others too. I could just imagine everything thinking that was Ryou on the Black Magicain and the "You son of a bitch" with everyone liek "OMGWTF!?!?!?" *chuckles* Nicely done.
Cant waaait for an update!! ITS SO EXCITING!! ^^
person Sarah
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! I cant just see all the endless hugging when they all meet again.. this is.. assuming they will.. 0.0 yeah.. yes they will! WONT THEY? *panics*
Lmao at how scared everyone was of Bakura! XD That was great.
Oh well, off they go to save teh others! ^^
UPDATE! ..right now. Go, shoo!
person Wicabeth
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;.;!!!! You can't lose Yami, Marik, and Ryou!!!!! *wails!!!*
person jennifer
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow i love the new chapter. it was awsome. i can't wait to see hwta happens next ur a very sensational writer. Burning sea is one of my favourite stories, and i only have 2 favourites. please keep up the good work. and i cant wait for the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! They got away. I hope Yami, Marik, and Ryou will be okay. As always wonderfully writen. Can't wait for more!


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