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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the first Yugiho fic I've ever read, and so far I really like it. But Kaiba.... don't tell me he likes my Joey!!! ^^;; Anyhoo, good so far.
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm..... Chapter 2 is okay, but a lot was left out. It's like reading the first chapter of a book, then skipping to the last chapter. And Grammar really needs attention. Other than that, it's pretty good.
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very good you should contniue it for i wish to see what happens next
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think a few bits are missing. The first chapter is a good start. The second just seems incongruous with the first. Keep writing.
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November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GREAT FIC !!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you finish it. I so hope you have Yami kick Kaiba's ass! Please email me when you update!!!
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November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Keep up the great work ^___^ I would love to see another chappy. You Rock
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November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE MORE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN!!!! poor Yugi
That Seto damn him for hurting little Y Yam Yami should go get him!! Update soon Please!!
That Seto damn him for hurting little Y Yam Yami should go get him!! Update soon Please!!