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for Message in A Bottle

by ryma

person Bambi
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Now that I've finally updated my fic, I can review yours!!! I'm so sorry for not doing it before, I've followed the whole story and it's fucking AWESOME!!! I love Marik/Bakura Malik/Ryou, you do a great job portraying it all. I can't wait to see what Marik's gonna do next, and how this "friendship" is gonna go with Malik and Ryou. Your a very talented writer, and keep up the incredible work!
~Bambi
person Shinigami24
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*LOL* Priceless indeed! A pity, that Yugi, Malik and Ryo never thought of doing that sooner! It might have saved them a lot of trouble...pls have them do that in a later chappie, and have Joey set up a video camera...*winces* Uh-oh, payback time, eh? Baku must be POD...Oh well, it served him and Marik right... Malik got hurt cuz of Bakura's stunt...So what will Malik do, when Ryo suddenly turns in a bad-ass? Have Malik be seme!
person cheuk_ting
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pls update it~~~~i can't wait for the next chapter
person Trish
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
;_; aww, poor Ryou! *drools* hot Merik and Bakura! ^_^; The chapter wasnt lousy =P Now hurry up with the next chappie! ^.~
person Eres
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think the 'kukuku' of bakura was cute. ^_^

Malik's so mean! I pity Ryou, please continue this soon okay. I really love this fic!
person Eres
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow Malik is in a really seductive mood! Hontiontinue this soon! I've read the sequel and it was also very good! Please Please continue!
person PrincessLemon
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AGH! NOT A CLIFFHANGER! As your Princess I command you to finish the story!
person AJAngelique
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*claps hands in excitment* *grins* MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! You are SO EVIL! I like you! Now, now that I'm done praiing you....FINISH THE STORY! I wanna see how the Yamis react to be naked in the shower together (this is going t pri priceless *gets the poloroid camera ready*)
person citricacid2001
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good grief... their two poor yamis... it's not often I feel sorry for yamis, especially Bakura and Marik, but i can't help but pity them...
on the other hand, if they end up having hot monkey sex... lol:P
great fic! hope ya update soon!
person Rurouni_agra anmi Kmi Kitsune
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Rurouni_agra: you evil evil person

Yami Kitsune: I LOVE YOU! That's what i would have done!

Ruaouni_agra: No...you'de be to busy with Malik...or Ryou, whichever

Yami Kitsune: So maybe not the first time....

Rurouni_agra: PLEASE continue this!

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