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for Surprise at Sea

by Naye025

person DarkQueen
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCK, I love it all!!!!!!!!! The dance was AWSOME, I do it too, although, I tie him down and enjoy how he begs for me to pleasure him *giggles* it's fun *licks lips* Oeah eah SO FUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should try it *winks*.......
Well, like I said I love it Anzu is gone, got a Lemon from all of them, what else can I ask for! But if you do continue I would LOVE IT TOO!!! So either way. You did an AWSOME job, Hope to see more stories from you, LATER.......
person KC
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: wow, Anzu in the Shadow Realm, yay!!!
Yami: *smirk* i would have done that koi, but i'm not in her story
Me: if u may know Yami, how'd u know its a "her" writing this story?
Yami: cause i am a genius...
Me: *rolls eyes* whatever...
Yami: i am!!!
Me: *laughs and leaves room*
Yami: HEY... U CAN'T DO THIS 2 ME KOI!!! I CAN'T BANISH THIS TO THE SHADOW REALM WHILE WRITING THIS STUPID REVIEW FOR U!!! COME BACK!!! *Groans* damn, she tricked me again!!! Anywayz, continue for her pleasure and write a sequal will yea? Continue!!! *runs after me*
person KC
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: damn, better not be Anzu who's knocking on the door!!!
Yami: *yawns* what did i miss?
Me: the whole entire chappie koi *hugs Yami*
Yami: *hugs back* happy Thanksgiving koi
Me: yea, happy Thanksgiving...
Yami: your review koi?
Me: *smiles* PLEASE CONTINUE!!! DON'T WAIT 2 LONG CAUSE CAN'T WAIT!!!
Yami: *carries me to our bedroom*
person DarkQueen
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW, that was let's see HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have to continue as SOON as possible, I do need Malik/Marik and Jou/Seto Plz Update SOON, LATER.....
person DarkQueen
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW, OMFG, that was so hot all 3 chapter Baking with yami Mmmmm.......! Excersise that was GOOD too, meybe my boyfrined and I should try this delicious occurances and have a little fun *smirks* fun Yummy!!!!!!!!! ^.^
Stupid Anzu grrrr....I hope you do something really bad *smirks evilly* Oh, yeah very bad Mwahaha!!!!! Well, I dree ree do Kura&Ryou next YAY!!!!!!!!!!! Well, update SOON, LATER.....
person Araki
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lemony goodness. Update soon

Yami: *tossing Anzu in a room* Stay away.. No duels, no help
person MOFAF
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the story...maybe Mia and Tea can show Anzu their side of the coin...so she can understand just what is going on with the boys and be a bit more accepting of it...(F/F/F) type action? can hardly wait for the Seto/Joey pairing...it's one of my fav pairings.
person KC
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: *blushes* sorry about not reviewing...
Yami: perhaps you thought that she might update it later and not quick?
Me: wow Yami, your a genius...
Yami: me? a genius? nah, its that big CEO of KaibaCorp. who's a genius
Me: hey, don't say anything about Seto Kaiba!!! HIS CUTE, SMART AND HANSOME!!!
Yami: *glares at me* damn u, now i'm horny to eat Kaiba up
Me: *blushes* YAMI!!! YOUR MINE!!! *hugs Yami*
Yami: *hugs back* of course i'm yours koi *hides a laugh*
Me: *sighed* ANYWAYZ, PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!!
Yami: kill that "bitch" Anzu (TeA) so she won't interrupt them.
Me: heck yea, don't like her that much. *grabs Yami*
Yami: CONTINUE!!! *follows Me*
person DarkQueen
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Holy FUCK, and I mean it HOLY FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!! Excuse my language, but if that was just the preview I'm gonna die before we get to the cruise.....So Babe, bring on the LOVE BOAT *winks* Now, gotta find the Boyfriend *looks around* were the fuck is he when you need him, *sighs* Well I guess a cold shower, LATER.......
person Yaky
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW, that was HOT, very much SO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're doing a GREAT JOB, Keep it up, and thanx for the preview It was VERY, VERY GOOD! I'm the first in line for the premier, so BRING IT ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON, BYE ^.^......

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