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Now that i;m in my correct state of mind i will give you a legibal review which doesn't contain any profanity of me fainting.


WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What did they do to you that makes you torture them so freakin much?

Huzzah. ANYWAYZ! I meant to comment on this earlier but i was... *distracted* by other things. I think that Aria is beggining to rub off on my good side, which happens to be a very good side to be on. BUT, if she hurts my babies, primarily by attacking the with "swords", i will not hesitate to kick the little chibi's ass. : D

Ass is not profanity.

*jaw drops* O_O ...I´m starting to remember why I don´t Yami all that much. -.- *mumbleassholemumble* He...that...just...ARGH!!! >_<;shakshakes fist* If it was up to me I´d have Aria rip his throat out! *nodnodnod* Damn straight!
*blinks* Awesome chapter, actually...this entire fic is beyond dreamy. ^___^ Aria is without a doubt my favorite character, and that´s saying something. Her being a girl AND an OC. o_O Never really happened to me before. *coughusuallyloathesOCscough* ^_^;; She´s just the kind of girl I´ve been waiting for in YGO. *nodnod* Damn, why can´t she be a real character?! *sobs* ... *stares* I like Aten too, of course. He´s not as cool as Aria, but he´s sweeter than homemade honey! *thinks a bit* Oh! I like the whole Robbie+Aten cuteness, and how Umi crushes on Aria. *ponders* I remember reading that Aria would have a lot of guys when´s she´s older...*laughs*...fits her. o_o *squeals* I can´t wait to see them in their teens! ^_____^ *sighs* Okay, this review is getting too long. >_>;; Great story, one of my faves. *skips off to work...ebil work*

That chaptas sas so sad!!!! A sign of a good writer is ones ability to bring out the emotions of their readers, and you definately are a master at that! I have so many questions now! I eagerly await the next chappie!!!!!

Holey shamoley!!! Damn!! Bakura's gone for good. Marik's down for the count. Yugi's gone. Yami's incoherent. Seto's gone. Ryou and Malik are weak... 0_0 @_@ I no like where this is going at all. This just leaves the kids, basically. And Joey. Ahhhh.........shitshitshitshitshit.....


Lady Elfskye

Yumi: No Aten I need to know if I'm right!! Please Aten!! I can keep a secret!!
Yuji: You should care about Seto and Yugi and even Marik. They were badly hurt. Seto's in the ow row rhealm!!
Yumi: I am worried about them but you know my pride.
Yuji: But Ryou is defenseless and they're going to turn poor Aten into a duel monsters.
Yumi: I doubt Aten will listen. He would be to scared of Stephen to care. I mean I bit he'll just go into those "Don't touch me don't hurt me" fazes.
Yuji: He'll need a hug.
Yumi: From...
Yuji: Stop guessing and be patient
Yumi: But I want to know!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yuji: Stop acting like a spoiled brat Yami!!
Yumi: But Hikari I really want to know!
Yuji: *Sigh* Can't you just compliment her on another great and fabulous chap?
Yumi: Thank you. You said it for me!
Yuji: Argh!
Yumi: UPDATE! And tell me!!

*gulp* I know where this is going.......
this is leading to the chapter that makes me sad!
Oh well, I know everything will be just fine.....because I know you won't torture our bishies for too long! LOL (But it is fun to watch them squirm!!!!)
Excellent work!
P.S. Sorry I haven't been able to leave reviews for each chappie lately......the new semester just started and my classes have me swamped. I am so thankful I have ficcy's to read on my breaks!

Thanks, I really appreaciate it. I jsut want to seem like I'm bothering you.
This chapter... one word can describe it. Well two words really: dark and trouble. Can't wait for hte next chapter on Sat.

DD: Damn!
YD: OO

DD: Damn.
YD: Poor Seto...and Yugi.
DD: *huggles Yugi* I hate to see the little guy hurt.
YD: *huggles Seto* I hate to see Seto hurt. *shudders* Just to THINK Mo's stuck in the SR again...

*blink* What......... the......... FUCK????????????????