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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person ssjgoddesschico
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Marik. I hope Aten and Aria will be ok!
person IYYashi
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: How can you really do that to poor Marik!
Yumi: I was right!! Aten is going to have a male lover. And so is Aria! Yay! Don't give me that Maybe..Maybe not stuff. Come on it is Robbie isn't it. I mean Robbie really is Aten's only friend that understands him and is patient with him. Who wouldn't fall in love?
Yuji: Stop complaining with bakurasgirl, Yami. We'll find out eventually you know
Yumi: But that's to long!!
Yuji: Well I guess we'll just have to be patient
Yumi: Good fine! THen UPDATE!!!
person ShadowofLight
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* ... Whoa... That's the same thing Ryou said... Whoa... *waits for update patiently*
person Kanika
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeep. x__X
I’m a-a-afraid of what will happen to M-Malik‚ ’cause Kura said he-he wanted to KILL him. How can you do something sooo terrible to my favourite Chara?? *sniffle* The last chappies nearly gave me a heart attack. I hope the next ones won’t be t-h-a-t thrilling so I will never get a heart attack. I g I guess they will be? Please don’t give me a heart attack. XD
I want a Malik plushie *gets really watery puppy eyes*
However,
I wanna read the next chappie now! I wanna read the next chappie now! I wanna read the.. *giggles* I’m a terrible reader, I know, I know.
I weawwy, weawwy never wealized thad my nickname is te same as Chibi Yami Aria’s second name.
That’s fun. I feel soo proud now. *giggles*

(I guess this review is a bit long.. ehm, I’m sorry?)
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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*faints*
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: Damn it!
DD: *sobs* Oh, gods...
YD: Dragon no like.
person Marikishtar77
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap! THAT WAS AWESOME! So what if it was gorey! KICKASS CHAPPIE!
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG *wipes my eyes* That was so cruel! Aku must die! I can't stand much more of this torture! Just make Aku l Mal Malik.
person IYYashi
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Oh god!!! Why did you do that to poor Marik!!!
Yumi: What the fuck!! Does Aku wants to kill them by raping them?!! Marik is hurt dammit!!
Yuji: Ohhhhh! You better not hurt Aten or Aria in that way!!!
Yumi: Agreed! Marik did nothing to deserve that. He never even hurt Ryou.
Yuji: Well update!! Bye!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just..........Wow.

Lady Elfskye

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