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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person MarikIshtar77
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
BAH! I'm a dufus! I meant aunt.....I guess I was thinking about my grandma more than I realized....I'm sorry....*smacks herself upside the head*
person Lady Elfskye
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Tuesday?!? Arrgghhh!!! I don think I can wait that long!!!! The part with the chibis was too cute!! Heehee!! Man....So Aku has taken step 2. This is so not good. He ( I hope you know which he I mean) better fight back!! I know he can!! Poor Hayden, stuck in his room cause of Aria. He is totally terrified of her. *huggles Hayden*

You gotta update sooner!!

Lady Elfskye
person Lady Elfskye
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
BTW, I just wanted to add that I know you are gonna continue the y, Iy, I meant being soooooo good at writing it!!! The mood, everything. Oh, and Janime's site, it says that Yami Yugi's true name is "Atem" (A-Te-Mu)Sooo close!!! It's reveiled in the Weekly Jump (Japan) part 333, "In the name of the King." You should check it. Bakura is *pure* evil in these! I mean, Marik holds *nothing* on Bakura. If ya need the site, it's www.janime.biz/mangatranslation.html It plays out the whole "egyptian past" bit, but there are A LOT of spoilers for ani anime cause it takes place after Battle City.
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great update do keep up your great writing ^_^

Marry X-mas by the way
person MarikIshtar77
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW! Those kids are so cute! I think Aria should get at least one more poke with her sword at Bakura's butt...LOL. Can't wait to read how Aku handles Malik....poor *coughsexycough* hikari! Great job!
person MarikIshtar77
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Once again you've whipped up 2 more chapters of pure awesomeness! I love your writing style! Keep it coming:-)
Sorry to hear about your grandmother....I just got bad news about mine tonight. I think there's a holiday curse when it comes to grandparents....grrrr...
person ShadowofLight
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay first, I am so sorry about your aunt passing way. To lose someone close to you feel like a knife in your gut or like someone stomping on your heart. At least you have your loved ones to help you through the grieving process. I know what's it like to experience death like that. *offers hug*
Chapter eight was funny, especially with that balloon of Aria's. I hope it deflats soon for everyone's sake. And Aten's nightmare, poor thing. I think Robbie is jsut the cutest thing next to the twins. Now I want to hug them as tight as I can ^^
Chapter nine is also funny. Are you going to do a fic when their teenagers? Soemtime tells me Aria is gonna be a real beauty when she hit high school but if she isn't careful around the candy she's gonna be a diabetic. But the lemon was nice and romantic and if I weren't so sick and have work tonight i would reread it over and over. However, the ngihtmare for Ryou... well if that scream is anything Bakura, Marik, and Malik are going to be waking up with heart attacks. I would.
Can't wait for the update but take your time! Take care and if you want to talk I'm here. Laterz.
person IYYashi
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: God. So much pain Aku is going to bring.
Yumi: Hot...*Drools* So freaking hot
Yuji: Umm, you're going to get me wet if you keep drooling that river.
Yumi: Can't I make you wet another way?
Yuji: *Blushes* Yumi stop it!! We talked about this so stop
Yumi: Fine. But I'm kinda uncomfortable and I don't want to hurt you so I guess I'll just leave. C ya! *Leaves room*
Yuji: bakurasgirl you are still the best and I don't think Robble would ever hurt Aten. They are both sweethearts. Of course n ann and Erin kids or something could use some decipline seriously! Well c ya nect time
person Caterfree10
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Konichiiwa!

*takes a REALLY Deep breath* GOD, I hate not being able to come here for so long! Anyways, LOVE the past few new chappies, bakurasgirl-sama! they are great! I just wish I hadn't gotten sick this week! >< It's official. My life is hell. =P Anywise, DAMN AKU!!!!! He's messin' with the wrong people, ra damn it!
Kyasarin: What happened to the sudden change from cowering over Aku to wantin' to beat the crap outta him?
Caterfree: Self-esteem tapes! ^_^
Kyasarin: -_-;;;
Catertfree: Anywise, I have to go now! Please update again soon!

Ja Ne! ^_~
person gralnak
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hooray for Bakura and Marik(or as they call him in Japan"that guy" or at least that what thely sly subbed DVDs say)

:)GRALNAK

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