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for Broken Reality

by MikoNoHoshi

person Silver Lily
schedule March 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*drools at the thought* Oooh, that sounds good. I really liked this story when I first started reading it. Please, PLEASE update it again. Onegai?
person Insanegoth
schedule March 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
IG: Oh you have to continue please please please I won't stop this till you continue *she starts chanting please*
*Ry walks in he is IG's Yami*
Ry: Please write more so she will stop this annoys me to no end
IG: *stops for a second to yell at Ry* shut up you you boy
Ry: oh that hurt *IG tackels her Yami and they roll around in a big anime dust cloud*
person Manima
schedule March 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
At first, the thought of Yugi doing something such as thus was a bit..odd, but you make the charas seem human, and therfore the fic just becomes comfble ble and a good peice of Hentai. Good work. ^^
person Someone...
schedule February 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was... that was COOL! I wann a see more!
person someone!
schedule February 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I...need...5th chapter! hurry!
person Estella
schedule February 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was so kawaii! ^_^ Don't feel bad about having plot, it makes the story a whole lot better, and when they finally DO have sex, it'll just be so much better and emotional. I'll probably cry ;)
Well, I reviewed, and I'll review again when you update, so you'd better do it soon!
Great work so far!
~Estel
person Leslie
schedule February 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the first Yugi/Yami fic I've ever read. I'm glad to say that I'm not dissapointed. This was GREAT and I hope you update really soon!
person erica
schedule January 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yay, a good y/y story! they are few and far between... i salute you!
person Esca
schedule January 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Write more? ...Please?
person ^KJM^33
schedule January 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait till you post again.. oh, and don't worry, a plot is a good thing.. even if it does get in the way of lemons. It makes us wait longer and want them more and more and more anwellwell, you get the idea...

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