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and....... and....... you can't leave it there that was sooooo mean - more soon please

Awwww..... once again, I'm saddened.... So Yami is being blackmailed, or so it would appear.... Hum, what could she have over him, now I'm curious. Update soon so I can find out. hehehe. good stuff...

WOW, I swear that almost made me cry, almost!!(I'm not the crying type, although I almost puke too, ewww Anzu and Yami gross)
GREAT job, and don't worry english isn't my first language either, but that sure sisn't stop me from writing *grins*!
You're doing an excellent job, you should be very proud of yourself, I sure am ^_^...
But, I gotta go,UPDATEN!!!N!!!
LATER...

Aww i love it hon more soon

Me: your doing great with your english anyway!!!
Yami: *sighed* here she goes again
Me: what? Its true though, her story is awesome!!!
Yami: how'd u know its a "she?"
Me: i'm a genius like Seto Kaiba
Yami: *looks at me* sure...
Me: what? I am koi!
Yami: *growls and leaves*
Me: *laughs* Anywayz, please continue!!! Can't wait for the next chappie!!! Please take that bitch (TeA) out of the picture!!! Wanna see Yugi/Yami together!!! When is Yugi going to admit his feelings anyway? So, please continue and don't wait 2 long 2 update, ok??? LATER!!! *walks away slowly*

I think you are doing great. I like the fic. Sure, it is really sad so far ... but I think Yami and Yugi are working it out and Anzu will rot in hell @@. Did I just say that? Yes, I think. Nevermind ^_^
I just want you to know that English isn'T my first language either but you are really good.
see ya

Aaaww! This fic makes me want to cry! T_T Yami and Yuugi will ge together, ne?! I hope so! Please continue!

P.S. Anzu's a bitch!!! >D

OK...I never thought Yami as one to keep his feeling from his light. Anyway I do like the story so far. keep it up and your english is just fine. Belive me, I teach English as a Second Language and I could not tell. Have a good one.

that was so sad - but really sweet - hope for more soon please

Oh that was so sweet. I absloutely loved it. I read a lot of Yuugi/Yami fics but not all I read are as heart=wrenching and drmatic as this. Godd juob. Oh and...please update. ^_^