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for The Shape Of My Heart

by yugistenshi

person Shakster
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was truly wonderful! Awww.... for something so short it packed a hell of a lot of conviction and meaning and angst. Even if you didn't continue it it would be fabulous.... iesn\esn't much matter who he (Yami) was speaking to on the phone, the damage is done. What a great work for a first fic, and your English is pretty good for someone writing it as a second language... It made me sad.... But that's a good thing.... Anyway, if you continue it that would be great, if you left it there that would also be great, either way.... I enjoyed it. Okay, I'm rambling at this point, anyway, I look foward to reading more of your stuff.... ^_^
person Yaky
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* and *sobs* and *sobs* Poor, my little Yugi, who could've been the 'one' tha Yami said I Love you to? OMG, plz, don't tell me is Anzu cuz, I'll kill that BITCh with my bare hands I swear, I will *growls* Nobody hurts My tenshi, nobody grrr......!
*sighs* well, after that emotional display, I like it although you're gonna fix the problem right? PRETTY Plz *gives puppy-dog eyes* PLz!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON, *whispers* bye....
person Bakes
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very emontional story so far, I really want to hit Yami over the head with something. He should be in love with Yugi not that bitch on the phone. Any way I really like the story so far. Can't wait until you update, if you do?
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh that jerkYami!

I hope you update soon and you did a great job English is not my first language either and damn you better then me my first fic and so many errors
but I think I'm picking it up anywho update soon I hope

FLOWFLOWER
person SecretSoul
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YOU-MUST-FINISH me likes this fic and i can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! who is yami in love w/? poor yugi, he's soooo cute^_^
person Blue Eyes
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sniff Sniff sad I love it so far and hope you update soon I like to know Want's going to happen with Yamd Yud Yugi
person kaede11
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with the story!! It sounds real promising..hope u dun torture yugi too much. he and yami should be together!! Anyway its good so far, keep up the good work and hope you'll put up the next chapter asap. Thanx!!!!
person F
schedule January 24, 1920 at 12:00 AM
Get to the bloody point already. We get that Yugi's upset and that Yami is being stupid and clueless. Move the plot already.

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