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I love this chapter!

Tristan's Dad is a bonafide bastard. Unbelievable! **gives Tristan a Seto plushie**

Keep up the good work, guys....and when do we get to see Bakura's "fangs" in this story once more?

Man a pregnancy does havoc on the sleep. Poor Kendra she'll never get a good nights sleep til the baby is 5 if then. Can't wait til the club.

Well, it seems that ts ars are getting heated by every passing minute.
Whoa, Tris rather freak me out there, but he is ok now, but for how long...?
Club re-opening, hmm...old friend.... doesn’t sound too good, however, before this story is over,
My fingers are going to be without nails. ^^;
Moreover, the baby it kicks, my baby kicks too-- a lot! I am six months now, and cannot wait to get her out of here.
Yes, it's a girl!!! I love your story so much; it is all full of love, angst., passion, mystery, and humor!
Keep up the awesome work, and update when you can!

~Yaky

Coolies! New chappie!! Uh, they're going after, hmm, Kennie or Ryou next. Just a guess. Old friend, no idea. Tris really needs to talk to someone. It does help. Maybe someone online?? That way, it can be secured (you know Seto would find a way to make it secure) but sorta anonamous(sp). Dr Cray is an idea too. I just know from personal experence that sometimes it's easier to talk to a stranger than it is to talk to "family". More soon as you can, kay??

Lady Elfskye

Another fabulous update... I still worry about who Max, Tony, and Aaron are looking for next. Well, actually if they're after Bakura the only logical answer is Ryou... poor baby... oh well, I await more! ^_^

Dang...very very bad stuff happening to them.... Ay...when would they ever get a moment's peace...

Love the story, my dears....just like always ;-D

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Myrll: Hey. Keep writing. It's great. Really. I'm interested on how you get Bakura to behave so well. I mean, sure, he's got a puppy fetish, but still, I like him as an evil killing machine ( Read: sex god) .

I love your writing. Keep up the good work.

Love yas,
Myrll
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As always this was a good chapter. Poor Joey! Poor Tristan! I have to feel for them. I liked the bit about Joey's shock turnning to anger. Great touch. Waiting for the next chapter.

Really good update! Not nearly as bad as I feared. Joey'll be fine... but my face nearly fell off when I read the FOR BRAD line. Good times... that was slick. Liked it a lot. Anyway, take your time with the next part... even if it takes a while... the updates are always worth the wait

if it's not one thing it's another...gah..i really need to go to bed now, i've been up all day and only slept for 3.5 hours last night..anyway, very good chap! ^_^ ~Leaf~