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for Unholy Trinity

by YumeNoDchan

person LeafZelindor
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Meow! i thought it was really funny! ^-^ very cute and almost one of my fav threesomes (i prefer yami over yugi...but i ca eit either XD) so it's all good in my book ^_^ ~Leaf~
person Lancer Monna
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hell Yeah!!! That is just the thing to make my day and I loved the part about the priest and his reaction to the guys. It's priceless. >_< I canwaitwait for more chapters if you continue it. Also sorry that I wasn't able to review your other stories in such a long time girlie, I've been trying to work on my other fics so don't think that I haven't been reading them. they're great as usual. Also if you need a beta reader for funny fics like this then by all means e-mail me. I'm listed under the athor directory. I don't mind helping out.

Later.
person JD
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was the most unlikely plot I've ever read. You've never been in a confessional have you? Three people in one would never happen.
Story made no sense even for a PWP. Everyone OOC. Sloppy work.
person Naye
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL! My Ra! That was so great! I loved the priest's line with the alter boys and just imagining those three naked...my, my, my...
Please write another one soon!

Ja!
person Ykarzel
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* Sinfully good *wink* Something about doing it somewhere so WRONG is such a turn on...
person YamiKaito
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HEHEHEHEHE OMG YOU USED MY LINE... I feel lov
ed XD, this is a funny ficcy...GO D-CHAN! WOOT!

Kaito: NIICE hehe in church! that makes it much more interesting...

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