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for An Author's Downfall

by Dchan

person Ykarzel
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*hug* thank you god. NOTHING on this site is any good anymore! It's awful!!! people who can't write, SHOULDN'T.
person Ykarzel
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i just read your reviews, and everybody is ragging on you for doing this. FUCK THEM. Somebody has to say it. BADLY. I respect you for being the one to do it.
person Zizi
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHAHAHHA OMGF GREAT!!! *rolls on floor*
person Kris
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* I love reading MSTs. That fic certainly deserved it. Most of the mistakes were simple language arts mistakes that shouldn't have happened. *shakes head* Anyway, I really liked it. It certainly made my day. I needed a good laugh. I've still got a week left of finals.
person AmberEyes
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Why did you do this? MSTs are all in good fun usually. You seem to have simply pointed out every spelling and grammar mistake she made. You think you're perfect? We all make mistakes. A good portion of fanfiction readers don't care about grammar and spelling because it can easily be ignored.

I hope your proud of yourself. You probably spent a while working on this and now you post it to a website to show off how much of an asshole you are.
person AmberEyes
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I must add...

While I do think you were wrong in this case, I must admit I agree with your opinions on Yugi in Hentailand. Meaning the author's over-reacting to advice that could better her fic. I just hope you'll think about the feelings of the authors before doing your MSTs.

I was wrong to be so ready to call you an asshole for this MST and I apologize for that. I tend to get protective over authors that are just starting out.

I do wish you would offer advice in reviews though, rather then drawing so much attention to the bad points of a fic. To make fun of someone for writing a story you didn't enjoy is wrong you you don't like it, don't read it. If you think it can be improved, give the writer advice.

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