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for Obedience School

by Mayonakani

person SugarYuy
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You evil evil person how could you leave it there?! I LOVED IT! And... I want more... *sobs* MORE!
person Jou-pup
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*was in the moment* *blink* Heh? *panic* Where's the rest!? O.o noooo! not fair! -_- just when things got good. You can't leave it here, so please add the next part of this.
person KC
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
my Yami's asleep so be happy. *laughs* go kaiba for making Jounouchi wear that costume!!! So, was that it or is there going 2 be more??? I mean, come on!!! We are just starting some good stuff here!!! You've just got 2 continue!!! Continue 2 update and don't wait 2 long for "us" to go and figure out, ok??? CONTINUE!!!
person Hitori Yokoi
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Go ahead and write the seme Jou sequel! I would like to read it! And if you need help, I am an expirienced Yaoi author, but I don't put stories on this site, but I do on FanFiction.net and MediaMiner.org! My name on FF.Net is overlyobsesedwithyugi if you would like to read my stories!
person leafzelindor
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
-tilts head- i'm not sure it's all there? unless it's deliberatly cut off...but i don't think it's deliberate? -tilts head- i was enjoying it though ~Leaf~
person alostblackcat
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oohhhhhhhh

this was a greac!!!c!!!

please write a seme jou sequel!!!!

i loved it!!!!!
person HAPPY GO LUCKY!
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You may know who this is. my mind is innocent with dan. hehe. i loooooove the fic. gotta put more gotta put more! i will talk later. more more!
person leafzelindor
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yay for lemons! ^_^ you did a good job for a first time! -runs around- okay anywa.....oooooo possible sequal? -perks- ~Leaf~
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
only a "slight bulge"? poor Jouno, short-changed again.
person Karre(too lazy to log in)
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I likes it! When you said bondage, I thought there was going to be some more whip and chains, but it was really cute. Jou seems to have a very nasy habit of gettng into bets he can't win. ::gryn:: Which is exactly how we like him! Keep on writing!
~Karre

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