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for Obedience School

by Mayonakani

person Sapphire
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this was pretty good, especially for your first lemon. I think you should write a seme Jou sequel.
person SugarYuy
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! You gotta write a sequel! ^_^
person SSJA
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*applause*
Jonouchi with puppy ears... Funny...
person DarkQueen
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You can't leave it there what is wrong with you *growls*!!!!!
(Please pay no attention to mt'st's very late and I'm cranky) MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!!!
That's about it now Im going to sleep!(Hey it also rimed ^.^)
LATER...
person Seth
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Amazing... I have an idea, you should write a sequal where Jou finds a way to get Seto on bottom... You write an amazing lemon scene, so I know it would be great. Anyway, lvoed this very much!



-Seth
person Seth
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's piqued my curiosity... I hope to be hearing some more from you... I'm a little upset you left it right there though... Please continue soon!
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was great and for your first hot damn!

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