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person DarkQueen
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, it was really good. Great job!
LATER...
person Kschur32
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a awful dream. Poor Joey. I hope his dad gets it in the end. I also hope that Seto is able to help Joey in the long run. And of course there is a worried Yugi. Good chapter.
person DarkQueen
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great update!
Poor puppy, but he's with Seto now. Let's see what the crow, does next?!
Please update soon, I like this story so much!!!!
LATER...
person Blue Eyes
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like it i hope you update soon ^_____%
person KC
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: *blinks* wow, i think i reviewed this story before but i'm not sure
Y *sn *snicker* you always forget koi
Me: *growls* I DO NOT!!! BESIDES, I'M BUSY OK???
Yami: trying to go and register in FF.net?
Me: yea! my friend tried to help me but i still couldn't get on!!! Something about varification...
Yami: you just need to look at your e-mail
Me: how? that's the one i need help on, i know my e-mail but how'd you go and look into your e-mail?
Yami: *sighed* you'll just need to go and ask jessie than *leaves room*
Me: KOI, GET BACK HERE! HOW'D YOU KNOW IT WAS JESSIE WHO TOLD ME ANYWAY??? *sighed* Anywayz, please continue!!! can't wait to see what happens next!!! Continue!!! *runs after Yami*
person R.A.L.
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
Big fan of Joey angst here. If I say pretty please will you update? pretty please???
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice! i love fics like this update soon, i want more ^_- it's great

person xxkurenaixx
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oOoOoOo...ahhhh...JOUNOUCHI!!!!!T____T...but i like it^^"heheh
cant help it if i really love JOU TORTURE^___^"...hey easy target..
plus i just love the guy^_^...well i cant wait to see what happens
next...poor Jou...hopefully Kaibas love will help him through...^^
person KC
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: SHIT!!! WHAT WAS THAT FOR???
Yami: *laughs* here she goes again!!!
Me: why'd you make Jou's dad beat him like crap???
Yami: calm down koi, its just a story!
Me: what do you mean by "just?" AT LEAST KAIBA HELPED HIM!!!
Yami: yea, see? Kaiba... WHAT???
ME: you heard me, my favorite couple!!!
Yami: ITS NOT YAMI??? I THOUGHT...
Me: *laughs* you thought wrong my friend!!!
Yami: but how can he fall in love with that bastard Kaiba???
Me: WATCH WHAT YOU SAY KOI!!!
Yami: *growls* his gonna pay
Seto: *out of nowhere* Pay what??? Where's my puppy??? *looks around*
Yami: if you may know, jou is in the hospital right now all thanks to you!
Seto: ME??? I HELPED MY KOI!!! YOU DIDN'T DO ANYTHING!!!
Yami: HEY, I'M NOT EVEN IN THE STORY YOU ASSHOLE!!! *leaves room quickly*
Seto: ASSHOLE! YOU CALLED ME A ASSHOLE YAMI??? BE GLAD YOUR KOI IS HERE, I WOULD HAVE BEAT YOU 2 DEATH!!! *runs after Yami*
Me: *sighed* those two around, don't you trust!!! Anywayz, CONTINUE AND I WANT JOU AND KAIBA TO BE TOGETHER AGAIN, OK??? CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! *runs after Yami and Kaiba*
person alostblackcat
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwww

that was so sad!!

is joey gomma be okay?

please update soon!!!

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