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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
T___________________________T *sob sob* T___T I guess this is just what happens when you spend your days reading Yugi/Yami fluff and then read a story where it doesn't end as happily as you'd like... Despite frequent events that made me bawl like a friggin' banshee, it was overall a very good story. Keep it up!
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was one hell of a story i loved!
what will be kool is if u decide to make a second part of the story in yami's point of view,
hey it's up to u. but anyway i loved the story and it was great, keep up the good work!
what will be kool is if u decide to make a second part of the story in yami's point of view,
hey it's up to u. but anyway i loved the story and it was great, keep up the good work!
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January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see more to this story, actually...^_^;; This was EXCELLENT!!
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Perfect. Utterly PERFECT. i am waiting for a sequel to when yami comes back into his life, i would very much like to see yugis reaction.
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December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!! Wonderful fic! It's sad, but great. Please write more.!
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December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
it's really sad......keep up the good work!!
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December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great. Job.
I liked how you wove the song lyrics in with the story text...it just flowed very coherently and beautifully. Again, great work.
BTW, who did the original song that you based the songfic on? Just wondering.
Sincerely,
Robin
I liked how you wove the song lyrics in with the story text...it just flowed very coherently and beautifully. Again, great work.
BTW, who did the original song that you based the songfic on? Just wondering.
Sincerely,
Robin
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December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was really well wrote I must say, keep up the great writing.
ACIDFLOWER
ACIDFLOWER
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh! Very good! A fic where Yugi was betrayed but won't go back. You did a really great job of writing this. This fic has got to be one of the best Yugi being betrayed fics that I've read. Please keep up the great writing and I look forward to reading more of your f Ke