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for Jouyouheki: The Series

by Starchan

person Santurion
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm going to enjoy second part more than the first one. Much more. Why? B/c of Ryou in skirt. BTW, why 'is' wearing a skirt? Anyway, Yugi/Ryou are soo cute together! Aren't they?
person Puppy455
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was kind the interesting. Love ur poem. Lucky u can write something like that. I know it's hard to write poems. hope for more chapters
person alostblackcat
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heheheh

i have absolutely no ideas.... but happy birthday!!!!!!!
person Ozark the MoonHead
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! ^_____^ Happy Birthday, gal-pal! ^^;; I know what it's like not to get a whole bunch of happy hdayhdays, but when you do, it's awesome! =D Woot! 15! ^___^ I'm turning 15 myself this August! *Huggles* Love your story, and Happy Birthday again!

-Ozark.
person Seth
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter... I think you should have one more chapter full of the usual lemony goodness I'm so obsessed with. But nonetheless this was a wonderful chapter.
person A person (yes, again!)
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ yay! The truth is unfolding! It's getting happier and better! Update ASAP!
person Kschur32
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the ending. Just a kiss. The way you presented this story was great. I loved it. If tyhe lemon happens fine if you you left it goo good note.
person alostblackcat
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one more chappy please!!!

this is really nice

and the poem was really cool

please write one last chappy!!!!!!
person Bambi
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! *giggles* Together, TOGETHER!!! Great great job, I can't wait for next chapter, do hurry! Very nice, yet so sad, then so happy! ^_^

~Bambi
person KC
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: that was so... *unable to find the word*
Yami: so stupid and dumb?
Me: *hits Yami behind the head* NO YOU STUPID ASS! IT WAS GREAT!!!
Yami: how could it be great? It was a stupid love letter!!!
Me: *sighed* its a love letter cause Jas tas telling his feelings towards Seto!!!
Yami: *smirk* sure, like that's going to happen
Me: *blinks* it just did koi
Yami: *blinks* what? I'VE READ THE CHAPTER THOUGH!!!
Me: *smacks Yami* go read it again in the other comp.!!!
Yami: *growls and leaves room*
Me: *snicker* don't mind her, she's kinda slow. ayz,ayz, CONTINUE!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE THEY ACTUALLY KISS FOR LOVE THIS TIME!!! *cheers* CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND DON'T WAIT 2 LONG 2 UPDATE, OK? CONTINUE AND I CAN'T WAIT 2 SEE THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!! CONTINUE!!! *runs after Yami*

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