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person zatken
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Come on, guys... I'm having withdrawal symptoms (no pun intended). Please update soon ;-D

ps: I read this chapter again, and loved it more for the cuteness (and naughtiness) of it all. What's next? Bakura in a pink tutu? ::lmao at the thought::
person Leaf Zelindor
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wooohoo! i finally got through all of the fics before this one and now this one -lol- very very good stories! eeee i'm loving every bit of this and can't wait for more! ~Leaf~
person Kschur32
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Love it. The lemon made me sweat. I love the jelly bean code.
person Sour
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, quick update=awesome. That was hot. I love jelly beans :)
person Terra
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! Well worth the wait!! I can't help but wonder if there will be a run on jelly beans now.
person IYYashi
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Oh wow. I'm like Roger and Moki to much!
Yumi: Make another lemon of them please!
Yuji: They will eventually for Moki's b-day!
Yumi: How are we sure Seto will let them be alone at all that night?
Yuji: Yugi and Yami will distract them ^_^
Yumi: Hope so. Well please UPDATE soon
person zatken
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, baby.... very very cool chappie AND very very hot lemons. I love how Joey got really naughty in this one....

Please update soon ;-D
person bakurasgirl
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*resists urge to go out and buy Jelly beans and chocolate toonies*

Aria: I love M&M's! Unkie Puppy would love M&M's!
Aten:...Ow would dey use M&M's, Awia?
Aria: It's melts in your mouth, not in yoru hand!!!!! *chibi giggle*
Aten: *shakes head* I diff up.
person KC
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the next chapter should be about Mokuba telling Seto about the dinner invitation!!! didn't he said something about having a dinner for him and Roger plus his mom? Can't wait for the next chappie!!! Try 2 pose itby mby monday cause "we" don't have school monday!!! *happy dance* PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! Yami says continue also... Yami: I DID NOT!!! *laughs* Anywayz, please continue 2 update and can't wait for the next one!!! CONTINUE!!!
person DracOnyx
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*remains flabbergasted and totally turned on*

Seph - *sigh* well, she's incapable of typing for a good hour or so, guess that means I get to type out the review. As you can tell by her reaction, that was completely hot and very well done. Bravo for getting her speechless and bothered . . . it takes a really well written lemon to do both.

Marik - no kidding. She's been working us to the bone for the three stories she's working on . . . if you don't count the ones that she's already got ideas for that haven't even been started yet.

So . . . a thank you from the muses of DracOnyx, and a big MORE PLEASE!

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