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PLZ PLZ PLZ!!!!!! KEEP GOING WITH THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i'M LOVIN' IT!!!! (no not McDonald's) It's a great story!!!!! It's shame you can't publish fanfics like these ones!

I was reading your chapter 13 and i'm happy to say that i have rotten tomatoes and apples with your names on!!! !!! GRRRRRR!!!!! *throws veggies and fruit* HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO LEXI?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Ok now i'm in tears, you made lexi be scared of Bakura. I was seriously crying there when i read that part!!! *sniffles*

I've been sending alot of reviews. I noticed that,while going over the story again looking for the definition of the jelly beans (found it) that you changed the name Jacob to Josh. I was just wondering if that was intentionnal or not. Really great story so far. Plus i can't wait until you finish One Way Street i think it's called. Keep writting! Plz? I'll give you a cookie and a hug? *puppy dog eyes* ^^

OH YOU EVIL EVIL PEOPLE....I LOVE YOU!! *HUGS*....once again, on the edge of my seat...always had a feeling about dan...YOU HAVE CONFIRMED IT! *GASP*....joey flipped...angela sounds familiar...*looks through yearbook* *points at random girl* like her *points again* and her....*trend of druggies in my old school*....wonderful....you no update, i no read, you no get review...KEEP GOING!

Yes...u are mean!! I like the song, "un-break my Heart". Poor Joey. Man..what else can go wrong?? Um...then again...I should NEVER ask that...LOL

Oh, my Ra!! You *are* evil!! Been taking lessons from MJ??

*passes out as I realize that Bakura's words are gonna come true and the worst is yet to come*

Lady Elfskye

-tackles YD- OMG! i don't know who to feel worse for right now!!! AHHH! poor Jou...-pets him- poor Otogi -gives him plushies- poor everyone else...-gives out chocolate- good chapter just the same!!! ~Leaf~

Okay, I'm caught up! Don't ask how long I've been sitting here... *G* I did as you asked and hugged the boyfriend. I'm awful proud of him too. Gods, how can anyone not wanna hug those kids until their eyes pop out?! Poor Mokuba! I feel for Rogeoughough. I know that kind of hell. Thank you for all the warnings about needing Kleenex. They're handy all the time now.

Lordy, I can't even begin to come up with the correct kudos for all of the lemons.

Damn, I just realized that I've spoiled myself. I've been able to hit the next chapter button this whole time. Now, I've gotta wait! Rats, this bites. Oh well, I can do patience.... *G*

Kat

DAMN! That took me forever to read Friends and Lovers. Stronger Then Before. Then Family Bu Choice! DAMN!! Took me a week to read all three, and wanna know something? I've beend reading Family by Choice, since chapter three, only I stopped on chapter three, because I didn't udnerstand one bit of it! But now that I read Friends and Lovers and Stronger Then Before, and read all of this one up to this point, I ACTUALLY FRIGGIN' UNDERSTAND THE STORY!! I'm like, 'wow, this makes sense now... I guess I should have the read the other two before I read this one.' Hmm, isn't that a good idea?! *giggles*

I love the three stories, and they are sooo great! I can't wait until next chapter.

P.S IT TOOK ME FOUR DAYS TO FINISH STRONGER THEN BEFORE! Man! I read slow, it took me three days to get to Chapter 22 on this one. ^-^

I better stop blabbing, but maybe if I blab, you'll update faster! Will that work? will it? Oh, I hope it'll work! And poor Joey, not another flashback!

Sorry, for just yacking... I tend to ramble a lot, kind of like Justin, only I'm a girl, and when I start talking, I'll keep asking questions until you are like, 'ENOUGH ALREADY!! I HAVE A HEADACHE!' ^^ Bye bye!

Your new fan,
Whitney
a.k.a Scarlet Moonflow