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I don't know Kaiba's very un-Kaiba like in this, and what's with Otagi?

eeee cute ^_^ XD i love it so far ~leaf~

Ohh! Great fanfiction! Ca wai wait to see what happens next...^_^...love your works...keep up the great fiction making!

this isnt a flamer its just that... urgh pretty in pink! we had to watch that one year for school and itsntednted me ever since

Wow I like it alot so far.....I loovveee drama very much *hugs poor Jou* I can't wait til the nxt chapter

Me: *laughs* so, kaiba's rich and Jou's not??? NICE!!!
Jou: *pouts although came out of nowhere* what's nice about that??? I'M A STREET KID!!!
Kaiba: *out of nowhere and hugs Jou* aw, don't worry puppy, it will change soon
Jou: *screams* PUPPY??? I'M NOBODY'S PUPPY!!!
Me: *laughs* ha, but you are in this story my dear
Jou: says who???
Kaiba: the one who's doing the story dumbass
Jou: DON'T CALL ME A DUMBASS YOU SEAHORSE!!!
Kaiba: *glares at Jou angrily* SEAHORSE??? SHUT THE FUCK UP MUTT!!!
Jou: MUTT??? I AM NOT A MUTT, DOG, PUPPY OR ANYTHING ELSE!!!
Me: those two never stop fighting...
Kaiba: yea, your all three of those things jou, you whore
Jou: *stares in shocked* did you just called me a whore???
Kaiba: *stares back* Katsuya, i didn't mean to say that!!!
Jou: *runs off crying*
Kaiba: DAMN! JOU!!! *runs after Jou*
Me: *sighed* finally, peace and quiet with my Yami buying some fireworks for tonight probably. Anywayz, PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND I APOLOGIZE FOR THOSE 2 FOR WHO IS ALWAYS FIGHTING!!! WELL, CONTINUE!!! *runs after Kaiba and JOu*

i feel sorry for poor seto.....

bakura's cool..

*runs off to read chapter two*

awww pooor seto...
it wasn't even his fault!!!

please update soon!!!!!!

That was good, continue! You must!

Aww Otogi! Why did you do that! -_- Seto you better find a way to make it up to Jou and start seduce him. I really can't wait for the next chapter. Please hurry up.