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This story was dark and disturbing; I really liked it!! ^_<

LOL

Malik and his Yami would just join them and form a gang of killers. LOL GO MALIK!!

Then they'd just be messy with bloody orgies and we'd never get any pictures because all the witnesses would be killed. :(

Wow, this was really good. I liked how you didn't stick to the yami/hikari thing, and mixed it up a little. I also liked how you wrote the death scenes, descriptive yet tasteful. If that makes any sense..@_@ I've always heard it was the quiet ones. *lol* But I have to say, Ryou makes a very pretty serial killer. ^_^ *lol* This story rocked!!

Ohhh, dark humor. Lovely, my dear. Funny thing: a moment ago I was cracking up (... it's 3:30 in the morn here, nearly woke the house) from your other fics, and now the voices are speaking again!! ::manical, evil little giggle:: Oh, please do continue!

Yay! CSI! Well, alittle something I learnt from the show: If u have a high alcohol content in your blood whe you get cut, it bleeds... A lot. Hope this helps a bit! (Ex: someone drunk wlking home from a bar. Bakura likes blood right? Well, I'll let ur imagination carry on from there...) The voices are fractured and having a party up there... Wheee!!!

You're right. You are a sick and twisted individual.

However, this is a very good story. I like the pacing and the writing style - you even manage to pull off the varied POV without it sounding hackeyed. And oddly enough, I agree with you - I always say Ryou as having a little bit of that scary-psycho mentality in him. He's a little TOO quiet, ne?

BTW - I know it's a little past the fact, but don't worry too much about FFNet banning your account. They're very picky - would you believe they pulled a story of mine and locked me out for a week just for one measly little lemon? It wasn't even tgrapgraphic.

So I pulled all the y biy bits out, and posted again. Then I posted the REAL version here.

Anyway, like I said, well done.

Holy! I love that story!!!! Twisted-ness! And you're right, it's always the quiet ones. Besides, Ryou's definatley got some reason for it, like when Bakura was in his *evil* stage, and self-harmed. Ryou has some evil shit going on in that head of his.

I have to say, you are my new friend, I love people who write stuff like that, it's so much fun to read, and it really is art. All the blood, horror struck faces, it's rather lovely. hehhehehhehe, I love this, will you write more Bakura/Ryou stuff????

Me again, Nice story. I want another chapter. Of course I want alot of things but judging from the last time you updated this will end up being one of the many things I don't get.

:P Nah:P , I still want an update.

This is awesome. I do like the way you write psychos and I would like to see this fic furthered. Yaoi!! Ryou, you better watch out. Bakura's out to get you.... heh heh heh yaoi.

Excellent fic!!! *grins insanely* Wow, I've read my share of dark ficcies, but this one is definitely at the top he lhe list. Not only is Bakura a serial killer, but he's gonna end up with Ryou!!! Yayness!! Continue soon! I'll be watching...Heh...^_^;;
~YamiRynEnjeru