rate_review Reviews

For the love of God, stop writing this piece of shit! This story is wrong on so many levels, I do not know were to start! Oh yeah, your character needs to DIE!!!!!!!!!

-_- I really don't like this story b/c I don't like mary-sues... or worse, Yami cheating on Yuugi!!!! What is wrong with you?!?!?!?! >__<

So, you had a homosexual Yami and now you have a bisexual or straight Yami. All I can say is this, it is about time that someone didn't make Yami homosexual. (A friend of mine now comments): Damn right, about the about time comment! Keep up the great work and please get a beta reader. Or get a word processor that corrects cap errors.

that was.... O_O... I just don't know what to say! write next chapter A.S.A.P, but don't be so mean to Yami and please write a happy ending between Yami and Yugi or many people will be heartbreaked

Wow. Your Mary-sue sure is a conniving bitchy slut. Ever hear of characterization? It's your friend. At least TRY to use it.