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I LOVE it ! Please update soon!(:

This was a very good chapter I feel sorry for duke though anyways keep it up I wish to read more soon

Uh-oh........ *eeps* None of this can be good at all.... I'm getting worried.t oht oh well! ^^() Suspense is the best. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

This is amazing. I can't wait to find out what happens. Please more soon. I love this story!

O.o Well, that sounds promising!! Ack, I was getting all interested and then you left off!! *fuming* Oh, and the lemons were great!! Go lemons!! *throws random lemons at people* ^_^

Duke is a broken spirit now... Poor guy. I hope Tristan's able to help him out. Keith better get what's coming to him, the evil bastard. *growl hiss bite* Yummy lemon scene with Malik and Marik! Malik's plan didn't quite work out though, did it? Marik d't s't seem all that teased... Plus he fell for the oldest trick in the book! "Malik, look over there!" Then again, maybe it was still a new trick back then? ^_^ I also loved the scene at the window with the servant! Seto's got quite a fetish... Bad joey, bad puppy. He's so cute when he pouts! Pegasus is still a conniving, rotten jerk. How dare he ruin everyone's lives! Though I have to say that he's very logical... How will they ever overcome Pegasus' carefully planned out scheme?! This isn't going to have like major character death, will it? If anyone dies, let it be the anonymous soldier #1 or Keith... No, Keith should be totured. This is, by far, the best fic containing lemons and an adequate plot I've ever read!!

THE BLOOD THE GORE THE FIGHTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great chappie peguseus and keith r bastards who are going to burn in the pits of ^_^ ^_^
please update soon

Oh no!! Duke!!! Keith should be dragged across the sahara desert naked then pushed over a cliff and, if he survives the fall, have his sorry ass locked in a tiny box and mailed to antarctica where he'll spend the rest of his frozen life stealing leftover fish from seals in order to live. Yeah... Enough of that. Looks like Yami's not a morning person, as a college student averaging nil hours of sleep, I can understand. Bakura loves RyoYay!Yay! Malik and Marik made up!! Yay!!! Make up sex in the next chapter!!! YAY!!!!

You're story is delicious. I louve it to tell you the truth. Poor little Ryou, al get getting beaten up...but theain ain he's lucky getting banged all the time by that sexy warlord, Bakura. And I'm glad Marik and Malik made up...that's good news. *Whew* Anyway, hopefully some other characters *COUGH* will be engaged or married soon *COUGH* so...yah...anyway, have a cool...er...life...or something like that. *waves* Bye!

Ohh! this is really good!!! i hope duke is gonna be okay ^_^!!! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!