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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nicley done, especiall ryou and bakura scene - very sweet! The only thing that was a mistake was when you said Ryou was the one who gave Yugi advice instead of Tristen, besides that it was great!
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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hurry! I want the Yami/Yugi lemon! They're the best! then Bakura and Ryou hehe to me anyways. I love this fic! Keep it going
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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks for noticing the mistake! ^_^ i fixed it now. thank you! ^^
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story i loved the part where marik got his ass kicked by malik! by the way who's your favorite character please update soon!
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
my favorite character is Yami Marik. ^_^ HE'S SO COOL!
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! Not only do I get Bakura and Ryou action (loved the rape scene) - me sicko-, but it makes me laugh especially between Marik and Malik *the part where Marik is kicked out of his tent twice and lands in the mud LOL* Can't wait for the next chapter, you capture the characters personalities well!
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:D I absolutely love it! Can't wait to read more!!
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was very good please keep it up
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really great! Please continue soon!!!!!
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very hot, and very good!
LATER...
LATER...