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by DracOnyx

person Jenna Casey
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE, SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Yami. 0_0 He's my favorite character..... I hope Malik isn't going to hurt him...... MUCH. ^_^ Update as soon as you can, please!!
person LadyGrey
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You had me at "Giving In" but then I decided to read this story, and all I can say is that you're an amazing writer. You're also partly to blame for my forthcoming YGO yaoi story -- not that it's a bad thing! Please update soon. Not knowing what's going on with Yami and Malik, and how ra'ra's going to /freak/ out when he wakes up, is killing me.

Oh! And I found a great fanart (definately not my own) that reminded me of a scene from "Going On" (I know you're rewriting it, sti still) so if you want go check it out, it's in my Shared folder:
http://f1.pg.briefcase.yahoo.com/riche_dragonsinger (look for "YGOFanart-Going On")

I guess that's it, please update please update and put me on this list for updates too! THANKS!

LadyGrey
person ThePopTartSpirits
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my god... you are such a fantasic writer... but why?

Why Bakura, Marik... why Yami?

I cannot wait for Yami's revenge.

Update SOON. That means now. ^_^ I am hooked on this story.
person Cheesecat
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's so looooong! @@ But good! Update soon! :D
person Terry
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you sure this is your first fic!? I love it! Now Yami has to suffer more? Malik is actually going to let Marik and Bakura go? I thought Pegasus wanted Bakura...oh well, guess you gotta update really soon to clear this up :) Great fic once again!
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE EVIL!!!! How could you do that tor lir lil Yami! And Kura and Marik!!!! Well, I can't wait till the next chapter!!
person Meg
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so good but so sad! I don't know if sad is the right word or not, but whatever. hehe. Yami's gonna pull through this shit with something er...psychic...right???? I can't wait for the next chapter, again, thanks for the emails. This chapter left me hanging!! ahem...definition of cliffhanger, eh? I knwew that ::shifty glances:: lol. Anyway, off to read more smut, to try ::key word lol:: to keep my mind off this fic and that bastard Malik!! Anyway, update soon~! I love your story!!
person YamiNShadowsGirl
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O OMG that was great damn hes evil i love it poor Bakura and Marik damn i cant wait to find out whats going to happen next poor Yami now hes gotta be a toy for Malik damn i love this you gotta keep going i wanna see what he does to Yami this is gonna be great im still in shock you gotta update soon keep goin
person lunarsfire
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...i can't wait to see what happens next, this is a great story. it breaks my heart to see them have to suffer like this, I can't wait to see how Marik and Bakura will save the day. please update again soon.
person Arainaina
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG what is Yugi gonna do now? I mean once he finds out what Yami did to save Marik and bakura please write more soon I wish to read more of this soon

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