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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I guess you gave up on this story; what a shame and it was getting good too.
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
.ok, i've finnished the first chapter... before i go one reading (50/50 chance) i'd like to stat how weak and stupid you made Seto look at this point ^_^;; or maybe you just want the boring part to be over quicky so you can start the yaoi? eh hehe 9_9
anyways, Your characters are like paper dolls; they need more deft. Seto is not badass enough, Marik isn't insane enough, and Jou is just plain wussy ;_;
anyways, Your characters are like paper dolls; they need more deft. Seto is not badass enough, Marik isn't insane enough, and Jou is just plain wussy ;_;
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo awsome! Update, and update fast please? Oh, and put more rape into it. Seto's my favorite character, and I love to see him squirm! ^O^
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! marik marik marik! ^_^ oh, and seto too! yay! great fic! update soon, okay! ^^v
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT JOB! This is one story I was on the edge of my seat with! Continue updating and make it good! (I'm drooling with Marik here!)