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for Take Me

by kaite

person Emiko the Black Wolf
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really cute story!You should make more Ryou/Bakura stories!THIS IS THE MOST COOLEST STORY EVER!!!!!!YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!Ummmmmm,sorry,it's totally cool!You need to update soon!^_~
person Sato takai
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Never underestimate Ryou! Mwahahahaha!!! Anyway, that was yet another great chapter. ^^ And is it jus, or, or do lemons make you really hungry? *Runs away to eat some pizza*
Good luck, and update soon!
ja ne!
person Jenn
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg! I LOVE this story! You have a wonderful writing style and you make Ryou and Bakura come to life! You give Bakura the emotion and humanity that I always thought he should have and yet was never able to see. You give Ryou the beautiful and sensual side that I was always sure lay beneath the surface of his innocence! I WANT MORE! PLEASE UPDATE!!!
person Sato Takai
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! Poor Bakura... depression does suck. And poor Ryou... Gosh, this chapter was depressing... And I loved every second of it!!!!! Keep it up!!!
person amy_dangles
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story!!!
I know you must hear this from every reader who reviewed you, but it's the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth!

I hope you update really soon. The sooner, the better!

~Amy~
person Marleen
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank u very mug for telling things more clear next time :)

anyway, I loved your chappie, and I hopey uo update very very VERY soon!!!!!!!!

@_@

p.s. WIEJ!!!! You called us beautiful ... WIEJ!!!!!!
person Ikyutakei
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol, this wasinteinterestingly funny chapter. ^_^ Well, continue it soon. Ja~
person Amy Hirosaki
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
""Okay! We’ve been done with the rod for a while now""

You know..... if you read it in antoher way... it sounds terribly WRONG!!!!!! Like they used it for having s.e.x.

EEEWWWW!!!!! I hope you didn't mean to do htis, but the rest of the fic was definately good!!!!

~Amy~

@_@
person Rhelle
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hnn...nice beginning. i love Horny!Ryou. Must read more @_@
person Rhelle
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O__O Oh, very nice. I swear, I could taste and feel everything in this chapter. You own.

:::runs off to read more:::

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